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Wow, the last scene was just hot.

I really wish Draco had divorced Aurora sooner cause I really don't like her. Just as bad as Pansy and Astoria.

If I was Draco, I would leave her, she sounds like such a bitch. She doesn't deserve Draco and Ginny of course doesn't deserve Harry. I hope they realize their feelings for each other soon.

This. This is perfection.

The most beautiful fiction about Draco and Harry in such circumstance. The way you worked with all the original story, even this Epilogue that makes everything so complicated. The way you keep these things of the original characters that makes us want to see them together with such desperation, because they just seems so impossible.

You take this masochist need of us to see what can't be happen, you make it impossible... And then you just make it. It happens.

Gosh, I'm so sorry my english is so lame. I hope you understand what I mean. If you don't, well : your story is wonderful, the characters are facinating, the plot is destabilizing in the most stunning way and if I could speak to you in my native french, you would certainly be collapsing under the weigh of my admiration and my respect for what you did with this fic.

Thanks for this great story, I had an amazing time.

I am sooo going to miss this fabulous story!!!

That was really quite brilliant. I just read your entire story, okay it's taken me quite a while, and it was totally brilliant. It was hard for me to get into the story at the start; I guess it was just a little too slow for my mood at the time. Then I got totally addicted to it to the point where I didn't want to sleep.

The idea to have Death not only stalk them, but to also have the mystery and the physical pull of it was very creative. I don't think I've seen that before. At the start, I thought all of the shifts were in Harry's head, like it was a perception rather than a physical thing. Then it got more interesting when I realized there really were physical affects to the sudden shifts.

I'm not really sure your characterization of Ginny was solid through the story though. It was very odd to have her go from this screaming she-bitch on the pitch to being kind and begging Draco to save Harry. I'm not saying she couldn't change after certain events, but the shift just seemed very sudden.

I have to applaud you for making it the entire way through the story without me being able to figure out who the writer/kidnapper was. Not to mention the twist with Draco's wife was excellent.

I would love to see a short sequel for this where we figure out how Harry likes teaching, how the boys are getting along (because that really is adorable), and how Malfoy Manor feels about having a half-blood for an heir. Nothing really long since I don't think you want to draw out the story, but just a little something would be a lot of fun.

Thank you for writing this awesome story. I had a great time reading it and now I'm going to go read your other stuff.

I almost missed the last chapter I wasn't online for so long! I would have been sad. This is such a good story, and though I'm glad Harry and Draco are finally safe and happy, I'm sad that the adventure is over v_v
It's an amazing story ^_^

Ahhhhhhhh! Love, love, love! I loved it! Heart!

IT'S OVERRRRRR! BAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

That was an absolutely perfect ending, if I do say so myself! :) Sad that it's over though...

Thank you so much for writing all of this!

~Camatie

this story was bloodt brilliant and i enjoyed every minute of reading it. thank you for posting it and i hope to read more from you keep writing your wickedly awesome ^^