rate_review Reviews

please update...
it has been ages.

Well I was excited to see that the story had been updated, but it was the same chapter! Did you just edit it or something? I really can't wait for another chapter! I love how this story is going! Maybe they can meet up at the club again, and Draco won't get totally pissed and will be able to take Hermione home whilst being somewhat sober. Can't wait for more, so please update soon!

- A Mere Reader

Love the story, I need to know what happens next. Please update soon.
Tracie

Congratulations on your little blessing. I hope he/she is very good to mummy. As for your story, I imagine you'll find having a new baby in the house far more intriguing, but when you do have the time to get back to the story, I'll be waiting. :)

Congrats on the baby! Love the story and hope you'll finish it when you have a life again. The same happened to me. I haven't updated my two longest WIPs since at the least the fall of 2009. I got pregnant, got a promotion, had some pregnancy complications and then had a baby girl. Since then life has been CRAZY! She's one now, so she's doing stuff by herself more and more, so I have a little more time to do stuff now. :) Yeah for you! Enjoy your baby. They're so cool! :)

Hmm, I don't know if I've reviewed this story. Because it hadn't been updated in a while I I just took to reviewing. But I love the story. I think that you are sticking to the characters just as much as you can. In Potter world I bet that Hermione got tons of money and awards for, you know, being one of the golden trio. But if she has to work at a strip club to get Draco, than I think you did it the best way possible. You know, being she's only dancing like, what, once a week, being because it does make good money and I'm sure she would want to do more schooling. I'm really looking forward to an update. Oh, and I noticed a spelling/grammatical error, and I know you said to point out if anyone thought that someone was being too out of character, but I thought this counted being something a Beta would usually look for. And being the amazing person that I am, I actually went back and skimmed through a few chapters because I couldn't remember exactly where I had seen it. But here we go; okay, chapter 9, in Hermione's note back to Draco, you said "what little they have in there skulls" or something, I'm switching tabs here so I might be paraphrasing. But the good part is where I point out the mistake. It would be "their" not "there" because you are talking about a possession, not place. Obviously. Silly little error, I know, we all make them. Just thought I would point it out to you, being the grammar freak that I am. And I actually thought that questionnaire was spelled with one n, but then I double checked and BAM, you were right and I was wrong. But I'm girl enough to admit it. Anywho, hope you don't take offense to me pointing out a little mistake, because I love your story, am happy to find out it wasn't abandoned (because when you first started writing it I remember the updates being quite frequent), and sincerely hope you update soon. :-)

-A Mere Reader.

Congratulations to you! I wish upon you decades of pure happiness. Thanks for continuing the story even with all you have going on, because it's really good and much missed. Take care of your new family. :-) HG4eva

congratulations! and still waiting...cannot wait for more ;)

Congratulations on your little one! I had wondered if this story would be continued, and was glad to see your note. Good luck and good health to you and your new family.

Glad to see you back. Congrads on the baby news! Kids are great and they grow up so fast so enjoy every minute. Can't wait to read more!