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Hey tried to review here on chapter 3, but havent done so before and didnt understant that you had to type in those words at the bottome, but anyway here goes nothing.

Chapter 3 was outstanding, but I got to say chapter 4 was ab-so-lute-ly amazing! Tonks shifting thru her forms was really cool, man on man that would be awesome if you had a woman that could and would do that...but anyway what was absolutley amazing was actually when she reverted back to her own form and they started kissing, that really got my blood pumping and the wild fuck, great position too! but what about how he left the RoR? little cliffie there!

P.S. here is something else I tried to leave on my review of chapter 3 and that was after Harry gives away all of the excess magic to the girls, is he going to have any of it left...I mean he did defeat voldie right, and I realize the girls are helping him get rid of the excess but it would be ashame if all he got out of it was some great fucks, then he goes back to his original power level while encreasing the girls levels!!!

and oh yeah I started this story on ficwad, normally I like that site but I too agree with you that it is hard to upload a story there, I tried 3 different times to upload my story there, before I got it right...but anyway still like ficwad, they have some really outstanding nc17 hp harem type stories there!

Awsome chapter. Well written once again and while I know that every chapter will be good I still can't wait for another Fleur and Tonks moment.
Well until next time.

Oh baby it was hot.


Parvati & Hermoine together & then getting deflowered by Fleur.

Its the stuff dreams are made of.

Great job. keep up the great work.

Looking forward to Tonks next.

Thanks

Another great chapter and would of reveiws the one before hand but the review link was cut off, damn computer only loaded half the chapter.

anyway grea chapter and I can't wait to see what well happen when Tonks gets a hit of harry's energy... well she live up to her names sake.

That was bloody awsome well written and sexy. Just one question really are you going to end the story after Harry has done all 5 girls or are you going to continue it further? I really hope you do. As for suggestions I don't suppose you could add some anal with Harry's session Tonks and or Fleur?
Once again great chapter.

i would think granger and patil would be the kinky ones of the group granger do to not stop reading and patil since she is indian and would be tought how to keep her husband happy in bed. she would be tought all knids of kinky things just in case her husand may like this or that she would not want to be repulsed by it while in the bedroom.

I think the only suggestion i have it let harry's magic be so powerful that it overloads the ritual and gets them all pregnant. Or, let them have "forgotten" to inform them that they are all now married in the eyes of the ministry or something liek that

I'm loving this story--keep up the great work!

I'm surprised that Hermione didn't already have an (estimated) Harry Jr. to play with long before now :P

I agree about the girls' comments on the order regarding her.

I love this story :) its really funny blablabla..........next chapter :)?