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Awsome chapter. You made Luna out to be so hot she's my new favorite Harry Potter character. Just don't wait so long between updates.

I normally get bored with smutfic, but this has enough of a plot to keep it interesting, for now.

Still, Damn you to Hell, for making me register at still another site! ;-)

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Why, the eff was McGonagall there (or representing Dumbles)? It's none of their GD business.

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Nice gag with the c-block metamorph/Trelawney. First time I've seen THAT spin on Tonks shifting for sex.

You're going to Hell for that Molly bit, though. Excuse me, now, while I introduce my sinuses to the wonders of coat hangers.

Great chapter, great story. This is my first review, but hopefully not my last. Even though Luna was hard to write for you, Hermione should be a bit easier due to the large volume of H/Hr stories on the internet. I was also wondering if you were planning on continuing the story after the ritual. Most of us would love to see a chapter or 2 of home life with however many you want to keep. I personally would keep all of them and throw Gabrielle a bone-r when she gets older and reaches maturity. Maybe Harry's magic adjusted over a few years and increased just a little more than is safe? Keep up the good work.

Brilliantly done with Luna. Much better than any of the others I've seen.

As always, I'm looking forward to his finally getting with Hermione -- for good.

Interesting. This chapter's smut did not seem too gratuitous, too.

But: That's not how you measure penis length! You go from the center of the anus to just past the tip. Right? I'm proud to say that I'm just a tad over average. ;-)

I think chapter 5 is one of my favourites. I wasn't too keen on Mrs Weasley rubbing her breasts into Harry's face you see.
I think the smut was very nicely done in this chapter. That was one amazing love making session between Harry and Parvati. I loved it when she was begging him not to stop eating her out. It was funny when Harry had his cock hexed by that first year lol.

Anyway, amazing chapter
Update soon please
tommy

now if luna is doing research i would think the most likely place would be for her to read PLAYYWIZARD MAGAZINE. which would of course have kinky things in it such as anal sex, butt plugs, handcuffs and things like that.

O h god! hahahaha

ITS OVER 9000!!! wahahahahhaha

A new chapter? *reads* And it kicks ass? Woo-hoo! I...I love you, man!(beer love only)N.