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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just. Wow. This is SO MUCH FUN! I love love love it! Such a crazy plot, but you bring it all together because, as you said, it could only happen to Harry ;) Can't wait to see him and Hermione together. HOT! Just so unbelievably hot. I might have had to screw my boyfriend halfway through this story. Ha! You're good. Don't keep us waiting for the next chapter!
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. You should write more of the girls playing with Harry's ass. So few stories do and it's so hot. Could use the trannsfigured dildos as strap ons. And cum play as well. Get Harry eating some creampies!!
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October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update.
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October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another week, another stellar chapter. Or chapters, I should say. Bravo!.
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October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter! Can't wait to read the next one.
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October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a fantastic story! So well written! Can't wait for the next chapter(s).
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October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Incrediby awsome. The only way you could makke this better is to have another threesome between Harry, Fleur and Tonks.
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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Did you get the number of that bus? ;-)
Good job capturing Luna -- although I am partial to my own interpretation of her.
Good job capturing Luna -- although I am partial to my own interpretation of her.
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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked your take on Luna (Chapter 6). I disagree that you can't peek behind the veil, but I understand what you mean by authors turning her quirks into a joke, or outright madness. I don't think she's really that loony, to be honest, but extremely authentic. One of my favorite characters and I have my own take on her.
I thought the sex scene between them was very believable and sweet. Especially with it being her first time, the dialogue captured both of their core characterizations in how they engage with each other. It was amusing, but really rather touching, that Luna went to so much trouble to find what she thought would please him at the outset. I appreciated that Harry would just want her to be herself; that was so typical of him.
Nice job.
I thought the sex scene between them was very believable and sweet. Especially with it being her first time, the dialogue captured both of their core characterizations in how they engage with each other. It was amusing, but really rather touching, that Luna went to so much trouble to find what she thought would please him at the outset. I appreciated that Harry would just want her to be herself; that was so typical of him.
Nice job.
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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a great little story. I've liked all the chapters so far. Tonks was really good. I like your take on all the girls so far. I hope that your version of Hermione isn't to shy. To me she seems very enthusiastic and just a touch kinky behind closed doors, after a lot of research of course. She would never want to be second in anything, not to these girls anyway. You have done a great job. Keep it going. Can't wait to keep following along.