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good start

oooooo fresh meat, just kidding, can't say that i like the story yet, too soon to tell! update soon

Are you making fun of us? What's this?

I cannot wait to see who he meets and hope that he finally gets someone who actually cares for him. Please update again soon.

Good start!!

This seems like it could be interesting. Waiting for any new installment with bated breath.

Very brief yet stimulating! Keep up the great work!

Hi! Sorry... I know I commented earlier and you haven't updated so there should be no reason for me to comment again... :) But i would really really like for you to continue.... preferably soon.:) And If you ever need a Beta or anything just leave a comment on one of my stories and i'll be over-joyed to do it for ya. lol, can you tell im just trying to hurry along the update? tehe. sorry, im a huuuuuge fg/hp fan!! In fact i think ill go write one right now (Which will actually be my very first one) and dedicate it to you! why? i dont know. but let's be spontaneous shall we? hahaha..... Sorry, waaaaay to much RockStar today.. :)

Good start! I can't wait to see what kinda trouble Har-bear's going to get himself into. :) Maybe the Big Bad wolf actually saves Little Red in the woods and we've been lied to all along? hmmm, well see. haha. I can't wait for the first chapter! Update soon please!
XoXo,
Kay

It could be good - everyone loves a good HPFG. But your next chapter needs to be significantly longer, or many people (including me) won't bother to read it any further into the story. Also I would edit the word crush and change it to boyfriend. Cause if a crush is making out with someone then in hurts, but doesn't mean they betrayed you like you implied. If it's the BOYFRIEND of a couple years...that's different!

Also it would be cool if Ron (shallow git) was making out with her because Harry wouldn't put out!