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by Lomonaaeren

schedule July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is just-in-time in action :D Loved!
person SParker
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #4...

*Draco smashes through the wall and smacks Harry across the head to make him drop the
knife...then keeps on smacking* 'What...the...Hell...is...wrong...with...you!!!'

Me:Yeah!!! Keep smacking him, while I call the S.P.C.A & PETA!!!!
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Seriously though I'm surprised you can keep all of these stories straight
without going through a mental block. :-)

Ooops, hope I didn't jinx you.


PS: actually that WOULD be funny if you wrote that in. I DOUBLE dog dare you!
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 5!! Did Draco stop it?
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG is Harry going to have WINGS!?!?!?!?! O man, great writing! I couldn't stop reading!!!
person Snivelly
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh, I can't help but think Draco's just done something terrible! Didn't Harry say any hesitation or pause could be fatal? I have the sneaking suspicion that being forced to stop the magic could be fatal as well :O

And even if everything turns out alright this will only push Harry further from Draco! How could he ever submit to Draco if he knows there's a way to end the bond but Draco won't allow it? GAH I see no happy ending here D:

I'm dying for more! I can't wait to see how you'll whip up a magic result to this utter fiasco!
person rafiq
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to learn how the interrupted spell affects Harry, or Draco, or both.
person jenny
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to the next chapter. :) I am totally enthralled by your story.
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yep, Harry is starting to see the light, in that he is re-connecting with his friends! Now as for Malfoy....well, I want him to get his mate, but Harry certainly isn't going to give in!Keep up the great work!
person Polka dot
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Harry won't accep the tructh, but then again it's still not very pleasant. A life attached to someone who smells like death.
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 4!!! Harry would dabble in the Dark Arts to get out of this? Oh Harry!