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for The Long-Desired

by Lomonaaeren

schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohhh, i just love this!
person jenny
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah... That last chapter was sooooooo worth the wait. I am going to make a point right now to read all the other fics you have because i enjoy your writing so much. :)
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 7!!! Hermione is one amazing woman!
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't expecting any of that!! Not that I can predict what you write, but that's besides the point!! What a turning point!! And I would apologize for all the exclamation marks, but I didn't think you would appreciate caps lock. ^_^
person SP777
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #5...

Well, it's about time!

The 'Man-who-Lived-to-Give-Denial-a-New-Definition' is finally contemplating
that MAYBE he needs to step back and get a new perspective on what he's doing.

Hmph, as long as Malfoy keeps a cool head and doesn't do anything rash or move
TOO fast Harry will start to get used to the IDEA and hopefully, used
to the man/vampire.

Then, we'll see from there.
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter. I hope Harry's recovery isn't quite that quick... But I like that he no longer sees Draco as a two dimensional vampire caricature.
person polka dot
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Twisted, but poor Harry and more so the poor Hawk. It's bad to lose your mind.
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH wonderful!!! I soooo need chapter 6!!!
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good work!!!
person dana_aeryn
schedule July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Like this Harry. He is so obviously in denial about his own obsessions. I actually think he is just as bad as the vampires he hunts because at least they aren't as single minded as he is (about killing humans.) He can't even see that something is definitely wrong when he has to resort to dark magic to 'save' himself from Draco. In a way, even with all his strengths, I think this Harry is a coward because he uses the excuse of Ginny's death to justify his own bad behavior. He is selfish in his grief because he acts like he's the only one who loved Ginny and mourned her. He does what he wants to do and actually, I don't really think he really cares for anyone other than himself. Even in his interaction with Hermionie he kept thinking about himself.Yes, he thinks about being close to losing his friends, but it isn't long until he's back to his self-involved thinking. Anyway, enough rambling. Let's just hope Draco stops him from completing the spell. Draco is also living a half life so I thing the two of them with balance each other out, if only Harry would let go of his fear and hatred. Can you tell I've enjoyed this series a lot?