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for The Long-Desired

by Lomonaaeren

person polka dot
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like Ron in this. He's looking out for Harry which is something he tends not to so in other fics.
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I literally LOL'd at the tea scene!!! That was brilliant!

Although I got sad when Ron drew his wand on Harry. I can understand why though, a concerned friend worrying over his best mate. So I get it....

....still mad at Ron though, the loser prat!

Great work as always!!!
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 9!!!
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Harry has finally accepted the bond!

Aww, poor Draco! He's right, if anyone's going to get bored, it would be Harry.

Last line is awesome. It really shows that Harry has not forgotten that Draco is a Vampire and is fine with it. I still can't wipe the grin from my face.
person Snivelly
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent update! This one was slower than some of the others but that's to be expected--not to mention it was still very good. Harry needs a little calm to figure out what he's feeling and Draco's doing a wonderful job giving him exactly what he needs. I especially loved that last line. It shows just what Harry's feeling without making him seem out of character or the story seem rushed. I also enjoyed the bits where the two worried about boring the other. It's such a sweet way to show they care about the other and (in a way) they can't live without the other. Can't wait to see where the story goes from here!
person SP777
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #8...

1. Awww...[damn it!], Awww...[damn it to hell!], AWWW...[damn it Lo'!!!], you're
turning me into a sap!!! I wish someone would care for me like that. *goes to
a corner to sulk*

*bounce back from sulking* Oh...Since I don't write, has there been an increase
in 'hits' with 'Mongoose & Viper', now that you've done 'Long Desired'?

2. Oh, and I like that we are seeing the 'compromise' now, after all the angst
and drama, I have to admit when you first started this, I WAS baffled with how
in the world you would get those two together.

This was done quite nicely. No, rush to get there whatsoever...

^_^ <--- My new smile. Never done it before.
person polka dot
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That's a big 180. I think Harry will have to have some doubts as they move forward and he's gonna get bored not working (I know!).
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bloody awesome update! Love how Draco keeps surprising Harry all the time :D
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*bonks Harry on the head and gives Draco blood-flavored chocolates*

This was great to read, it was very cute and reaffirming to see Draco caring for Harry so much! Great work!
person rafiq
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for Ron to find out about Harry and Draco.