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for The Long-Desired

by Lomonaaeren

person polka dot
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww I wanted to see Draco kiss Ron's foot. At least he kept the sock on. Bare feet are nasty.
person Juliashka_Shu
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
god, this is brilliant)))) they are wonderful, entrancing... want to know more every time you post another part. thank you)))
person jenny
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you. I had a wonderful trip. :) I really like how this is going but i can only guess at what could happen next. cant wait.
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
seriously i would have slugged ron for what he suggested.
person SP777
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #9...

Now, THAT was different. That's the first time I've read about Ron ACTUALLY
trying to hex Harry into submission during a fight, instead of the usual
yelling.

Kinda gave the chapter an unusual 'funny' atmosphere. You know I thought
for sure you would have had Draco to prematurely wake up and intervene
on Harry's behalf, but that would have been premature.

All in all, it will be interesting to see how this end. Speaking of ending,
I've noticed a few of your stories as of late, they seem to have an
'open-endedness' [yes I made that up] about them. In other words, there's
no sense of finality...they feel as if you were thinking of doing an
'epilogue to finish the story', but decided against it at the last
minute.

Have you noticed?
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 10!!!
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww damn that's really sweet
person Yuutousei
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
[/is too lazy to log in]

person jenny
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo... I went on a 4 day vacation and when i came back 2 chapters awaited me. Yay. This is better than a birthday present. :)
person Snivelly
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha, you're probably right. Harry's too stubborn for his own good sometimes xD

Ahh, Ron! How I've missed him. And he was so wonderful in this chapter! My favorite bit was his line: "You