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for Bid for Love

by triz

person mamabear52
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hope that there are lots more laughs coming. Any idea how many more snickers we can expect chapterwize? Keeo them coming!
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person neelix
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww, that was quite mushy! sweet chapter. I can't wait for them to get a room either!
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person lemontwist
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Nothing bad will happen to you tonight." What a great line! Will she make him watch a chick flick??
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hermione doesn't have glasses. But whatever! Your ficky! And a damned good one too! Really good! Really great! Poor Trelawney... poor delusional Trelawney... but Severus was just soooooooo sexy in this chapter! He handled her so well!

As always, Kudos to you!
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful chapter. I am glad that Severus did talk to Sybill and set her straight. I look forward to the next chapter.
person VoraciousReader
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, at least he was a little kind to poor Sybl. Maybe she and Sirius could go pub crawling together? He really does strike me as the kind of man that needs someone to take care of, poor guy. Now, what movie shall Hermione take Severus to see? Half-blood Prince just opened!(smirk)
person Robin
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Uuuuh, nice little chappie.
A bit on soft side, though, our Severus ;-) But it was a very nice thing to go talk with Trelawny.
Well, let's see what Hermione has up her sleeve for him then.
looking forward to this.
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh their love was written in the stars! Great going so far! Thanks