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for Bid for Love

by triz

person pickles
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
BETTER THAN SEX CHOCOLATE CAKE
DEATH BY CHOCOLATE CAKE
VOLCANO CAKE
CHOCOLATE MOUSSE
OR
CREME BRULAEE OR CHOC CREME BRULAEE
Great chapter
Maybe after dinner the restaurant has a special after dinner room with special drinks
Buttery Nipple -
Safe Sex on the Beach -
Virgin Sex on the Beach
Creamy Sex on the Beach
Oral Sex on the Beach
Blue Balls
Screaming Banana Banshee
Screaming Multiple Climax
Sexual Trance
Silk Panties
Silk Stocking
Sloe Comfortable Screw.
Hopefully this will spin Sev's head...
XD
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahahahaha! And you just *know* what Severus is sitting there thinking about Patrick Dempsey. I can almost hear him muttering as I type ;)

I'm glad that Hermione got her kiss and that Severus is at least trying to be gentlemanly, though not sure the lamp post counted as that *snort*

Can't wait for the next!
person VoraciousReader
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sev does musicals? Oh well, nobody is perfect. The kiss was good, though, Nice chapter, will wait for more!
person Anon
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yep, sure Hermione's wearing glasses oO anyone questioning Trelawny's vision? ;-)
good as ever - maybe another chappie for a all your fans and readers? Pretty please.
Oh, and thanks for *that* scene *sigh*, yet I sure know how Severus feels with Hermione dancing and ... well... singing out on the street. ;-)
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Great start to this story.
person Anon
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. I look forward to the next chapter.
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha! I can just see the look on Snape's face as the bidding started going up! I love it. Cant wait for more. Thank you for writing and posting it!
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... hot.
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was hot!!!!!!