rate_review Reviews

This was an entertaining story. The concept was there, but the character depth was lacking. It could have used a bit more time really developing Severus and Hermione, though the touching moment between Sibyl and Severus was very unique. It shows us that softer side that we all wish to believe he has, and it did bring her down to earth more for us. The only thing that seemed out of place was his inability to keep it in his pants. I mean, yes making out with Hermione Granger after years of being alone may ultimately undo a man, but feeling as if he can't eat because of the "natural enhancers" on the menu? I do wish we'd seen a bit more of their love making. (Sorry if the comments are all over the place.) Your characterisation of the various girls who were eager to bid on Severus was also intriguing. And I found a good laugh, in a tender way, at Millicent Bulstrode and her bid on Harry Potter. It did keep me entertained, so overall, good work.

Strawberries? Should her lips taste like popcorn or at least cherry coke? LOL This is so sweet. I'm thoroughly enjoying it.

Personally, I love the sampler dessert plate. It gives a small taste of everything without overloading you on only one dish. ;-) I look forward to seeing more of them and what happens the next morning. Plus, the thought of the two of them seeing Sybil again as a couple already has me giggling. Update soon again, okay? Thanks! HG4eva

A wonderful chapter. I look forward to reading more.

Hot Hot oooo HOT!

Good lord that was hot! More please!!

A little bite! You tease! I very much liked it.

hahaha smoooth mooooves snape
this is great keep it up

I LOVE that he kissed her at the table!!! That was the perfect response. More please. :o)

Is it okay to ask for more...! Humph! No, it isn't okay! I'm jealous you lucky, talented writer, you! Jeeze! What a great story! Thanks for writing it. I love it!