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for Bid for Love

by triz

schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Busy week, so I didn't get to read until this morning. Thank you for a great start to my day! They are fun and funny together and apart. But, ouch! Two broken noses in one day! EEK! lol Poor Sev. I think Hermione is going to just have to make him feel all better. Don't you? :-) Thanks, hon! HG4eva
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Eeeee! Oh man, I'd like to see that war.

Lovely ending, i'm thrilled to see he was planning to propose ;) (And, considering how badly everything else goes for him, you kinda have to wonder what cock-ups would occur there!)

Thanks so much for sharing and all the laughs you've given me!

xx
person pickles
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was mean.
you should at least do another chapter.
or 2
great story.
hopefully his nose is feeling better
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! You can't leave it there!!!! Evil, Evil,Evil author! Bad girl...you must write some more of this. Does Viktor get his girl? Will Hermione break Severus' nose again? Will the two men duel over the fair maidens hand? Will dumbledore ever stop twinkling? I need answers! I REALLY NEED ANSWERS! *SULKS*
I have loved this fic from the very start and it can't just end like this!?!?!
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE will you write a bit more?
*humbly bows to worship at your altar offering gifts of Honeydukes best and a dozen sugar Quills!*
Blessings
Amethystique x
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very cute!


schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so cruel leaving it like that. I would have really liked to see the bidding war between Krum and Snape. : )
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A great ending. I enjoyed reading this story.
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Are you out of your mind?? Leaving it there? You had better be coming up with a sequel sweetie! You can't leave your readers sitting on pins and needles waiting to see what happens!! Of course we know that Severus will get Hermione, but we still need to know how he gets rid of Krum. Even if it is only in a ONE SHOT. Anything! HURRY!
person Tenar10r
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
uhoh! Hopefully Snape has been saving his knuts!
person VoraciousReader
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Victor! He's going to have a case of butt-boils to make the record books, LOL. Love to see him on a broom after Sev get s through with him. Good story, it was a lot of fun.