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What a way to leave it!!!!

i love this story & i would love 2 add it 2 my favs but i dont know how...
if you or anyone can tell me that would be great my email is (day crump79 @ yahoo)

First I want to say good story. I really enjoyed it. I was a good mixture of humor and Severus' moods. But now I want to say... AW MAN! What happened next? Who all bid on Hermione? Did Snape have to hex Victor? Or that prat Ron? Maybe we will get lucky and you will write a sequel! (hint) Well good job. :)

you, like t stevenson and mia madwyn, are an amazing writer who writes incredibly sweet and hilariouus stories. please don't ever stop writing because there will be many heartbroken people like me if you do.

GREAT story! I loved it! Poooooooor Snape and his nose....Is there a sequel/plans for one? To the author page! If there isn't, I really think you should consider writing one. Great job.

omg, snape running from trewlary and getting on his knees for hermoine was hilarious! this whole chapter was funny

Enjoyable story. I have liked your style of writing. I have several more to go to read, and I'm looking forward to each one. {Smiles}

thank you so much for writing this! I really could use something fun to read after all the gloomy ff ^-^ keep on writing~~!! xD

I must sadly admit that I am disappointed in this story's ending. It should have stopped after she won him in the auction, and their date. I do understand that you wanted to make it more complex other than just the date and that they were in love, etc, however- Chapters 12, 13, and 14 were essentially a dreadful degradation of character and plot. By the time they'd gone for the realization in Chapter 13-- Severus was so out of character that he might as well been Ron or a male Mary Sue. I could have read it as anyone at that point. And Hermione was unfortunately not much better. I really wish that people would feel the natural ending of things- and yours fell quite nicely after the date. You could have still included an epilogue wherein he did have to bid on her the following year, to perhaps repeat the date with all the implications of what had gone on between them in the between time. I do hope you won't take this too harshly, but I really did expect better after the potential that this story had.

This story was great! I'd love to see more. What happens with Millie and Harry? Does Viktor win the date? What about Trelawney? We need a sequel. Pretty please!