rate_review Reviews

Oh this chapter was sweet. I like what you've done with Hermione and Ginny's characters in this chapter. And I love Ron's whining and the sense that he likes Hermione as more than just a slave.

And Harry's golden tongue? Thank Merlin for that because the hilarity of Ginny's sucky (no pun intended) blow job skills was just too much.
Oh and I won't forget about naughty Charlie and the incident with the twins and Blaise. That carriage ride could get quite interesting...


On a side note, I hope everything went well with your eye surgery and that you feel better really soon.

Damn it's hot in here! Where is the a/c switch I need to get it colder. Oh man that was AMAZING writing. Great job!

Oh wow! That was hot! Harry is definately a minx!

just an idea but wat if Blaise, as punishment, was Hagrid's for a few days and Hagrid always left his cum in Blaise. If you run with it fine if not all good. just thought it woud be a rather hot idea.

I love it! Update soon please! =]

Oh this is so good... I'm happy Lucius ended Dracos punishment early, I thought he was being a bit to hash. I hope to see more of angsty Blaze in the future, but that's for you to decide, it is your story.

If Harry's allergig to silver, could he perhaps be part werewolf...? Now that would be a twist!

Anyway, good luck to your surgery, speedy recovery, and hope you can update soon again! Keep up the good work!

I really like this story. This is definitely a new take on Slave!Harry. Kudos to you, and please update soon. Please put me on your emailing list. My email is: ravenclawspride9@aim.com

*Squeeeeee!* Oh wow this is such a great story! I couldn't put it down for a single minute, and your updates are so fast! Thanks for all the lovely spoiling of your readers, this story is wonderful and I can't wait to read more. ...I soooo have to put this one in my favorites, it's too yummy to lose track of. ^_^

I hope your surgery goes well, the pain killers they give you afterwards are awesome, so I wish you luck and no pain!

Well I didn't expect that! Great chapter!

I loved the interaction with Harry and Severus at the beginning of this chapter. Severus was so sweet and caring to Harry and explaining to him about what happened. I got a funny little image when Severus told Harry to grab himself of Harry with this surprised face and his hand flying down to touch himself without even thinking about it. It made me chuckle. I don't know if that was your intention, but it was a cute and slightly humorous part so kudos!

I have to say, the part with Blaise and Hagrid was kind of weird for me. I don't really like thinking about Hagrid as a sexual being (Kinda makes me get a full body shudder) but his personality in this was so different that I just tried imagining it as a different person/giant all together and it was a little better. Will Blaise continue to be jealous and resentful to the two other slave boys even after they helped him through that? Who was the one to say that Blaise was doing good? It didn't say. In my mind, I imagined Harry saying that, but it could have been Draco just the same.

The scene at the end was hot. I like how possessive, but still gentle Severus is with Harry. Why did Harry volunteer to have sex with Hagrid? I guessed it was just his self-sacrificing bravery coming through. But back to the Snarry - very nice lovin'. I wonder when Harry is going to discover that he is probably with Severus's child.

Lucius can never stay mad at Draco. I am glad he decided to cave in though. I don't think he would want Draco to be completely submissive. I think he likes a little bit of will from his son/slave. Draco seems to be a little more controlled, but still has a mind of his own.

Sorry, I'm gushing. It was just a good chapter. I hope your surgery goes alright. Hope you feel better and aren't too sick from the anesthesia. Get well soon!