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for A Slave to a Slave

by LydiasTravel

person KittenCatt
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

I LOVE this story!!! I loved it when you started it the first time around and I was so happy when you started to work with it again!!!

Please update soon!!!

Thanks,
KittenCatt

ps.:I love the ginger part and the enemas! I hope you'll write more about them! And as a suggestion for a new kink how about nettles? As punishment for one of the boys? And as they are still going to be traveling it would be relatively easy to find some nettles off the road!
person Lakoma
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW. I just found this story and thoroughly loved it. I do hope that you aren't going to allow Severus to share Harry with anyone...except perhaps a foursome with Lucius and Draco--that would be fun. The last chapter was so OOC with the Weasley's--except for Ron. You nailed his character perfectly. Are you planning on making Albus and Sirius sexual deviants as well? Sirius I can see as truly perverted, but Albus...well, that's just a bit too icky to even think about. If you are willing, would you email me when you update? I would truly appreciate it.BTW--my grandmother was allergic to both silver and gold. Platinum was the only metal she could wear. I enjoy your incredibly deviant brain...very twisted at times, but lots of fun. I am looking forward to your continued updates. You saw the latest movie? Very good, but I really hate the whole GW/HP pairing. Refused to read the epilogue in book 7 because of it. Thanks again for writing such a fabulous story. Now...onto the next chapter!
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YEA! That ending was so spectacular...i think it was one of my favorite scenes so far! Now for the questions!!! Are you going to expand on the Harry/Snape pairing like adding a Weasley? Because if the twins get Blaise and The Malfoy's get Charlie isnt it only fair that Snape and Harry get someone too? Just wondering!!! perhaps I should keep bribing you with magical baked goods!! *scampers off to think of new goodies*
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more, and hopefully soon. Love the story
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hope your mouth is okay from the surgery. I know how painful that can be and you should treat yourself to all the ice cream you want for writing right after all of that. I could barely hold my head up for two days aftre I had my wisdom teeth out.

This chaptre was just spectacular. It started off with a bang(literally) with Harry and Severus and all of the goings on with the Weasleys was interesting. I wonder if Charlie is going to end up becoming one of Lucius's slaves too? Like out of choice maybe?

Oh, and I loved Harry's little dirty talk at the end. Very hot. I am more than sure Severus will make good on all the things Harry said later on that night.
Feel better soon!
person Goldeneyed Angel
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering in my curiousity are the school houses the countries in this story? And why don't Severus and Lucuis just apperate or is there some kind of warding between the contries stopping them from doing so? Though great job you have done so far and I LOVE your ideas they send shivers up and down my spine.
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*positions fan* ... so, did the anaesthetic come up with that?! :D

Charlie and the twins seem well up for it. This makes me happier than you can imagine *snort* Sorry for the delay in the reply for this chapter, was away at a funeral.

Hope you're feeling better xx
person Nombre-De-Pluma
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, reward time, eh? Can't wait for the next update!
person allyroksmuch
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very Very good! I so do wish Harry can have Severus' baby! Love the story!Cant wait for the next chapter!
person Makovaso
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, please update soon