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for A Slave to a Slave

by LydiasTravel

person Jan
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More. More. More, I want more!!! LOL

Yes, it's just as good, I can't wait for chapter 8 ^_^

Jan


schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh ouch, poor Harry *wince*

I do like Severus' confusion over his compassion, though.

Can't wait to read the next chapter!
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay, I loved how you changed this chapter! Lucius coming by wasn't bad, but I like it better that Snape worked it out alone.
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco. But damn! The imagery with Draco having his nipples pierced was so sexy. I always loved Draco best. *grins* ;) Anyways... I'm looking forward to the escape to Gryffindor and finding out why Harry is so special in this story. I meant that in the best possible way. I just meant the differences between your universe and J.K. Rowling's universe are completely different (thank god!). Until the next update, which I will eagerly be awaiting! :)
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gah! This is so twistedly awesome I can't get enough of it. Kind of like Draco and his ass plug! XP
person Hambares
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was great to see updates already! I can't wait to see why Harry was deemed infertile if in fact he will be able to become pregnant. I know that will make the Dark Lord mad though!
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, yay, you're writing more!!! I cannot wait to continue where you stopped...

Hm, I wonder though, if Lucius - for Draco's first but plug - chose the smallest he could find, how is it made by Severus??? Wouldn't Severus just have made it the size Lucius wanted it to be?
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I believe I've another favorite.
I hadn't seen your first version of the story so I can't say it's any better, however I'm sure it couldn't be worse.

I do hope to read more in near future.
person Jan
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I've been looking for this fic, for ages. I happy that you decided to re-post it :D, can't wait for chapter 7, hope it's soon ^_^

Jan
person Selera
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well I like the rewrite it's as good if not better than the original.