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for A Slave to a Slave

by LydiasTravel

schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Goody, goody, I got to read three chapters at once. I take it Harry is now pregnant. It is a good thing they are leaving, if or when Voldemort finds out he will be very upset that Harry was a bearer and he didn't figure it out first. Cant wait to see what happens next.
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh Draco, when will you ever stop disobeying? I like how Blaise tries to get Lucius to relieve his erection and Lucius just ignores him.
More updates please.
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would have guessed Draco would take his viriginity into his own hands. I liked this chapter; I am looking forward to the next one.
person Hambares
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am guessing Draco loves spending his time being punished. He's a willful creature, huh? But Harry is the lucky one, getting to fall back asleep with his Master's penis still buried in him!
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
".............................." Damn!!!!!!!!!!!!! What can i say that was unbelieveably H.O.T. Naughty, Naughty, Draco someone needs a spanking but if your going to be punished that's the way to do it. another ride i won't forget. Excellent Job!!!!!!!!!

btw where did you learn to write the juciy smut...do you teach?;D
person magentah
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love this! Rapidly becoming one of my favorite WIPs, both for the story itself (so hot) and how quickly you update. :) Can't wait for more.
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please continue; I anxiously await each chapter.
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Alright, so, on a whim I decided to read this story. I have always been a fan of Snarry and have never read too many fics where Harry was Snape's slave. I am so glad I decided to give this story a shot! I like the way you characterized everyone. They are different, but they still contain some of their original personalities that make them who they are. You say that you are reworking this story? I'm glad. I probably wouldn't have gotten to read it otherwise.

Okay, now on to reviewing the actual chapter! The plot is thickening! Harry better watch out what he lets Draco and Blaise talk him into. He is going to get in to trouble. I hope Severus and Lucius do not find out about the three's little experimenting. Course, with all the crazinedd that happened afterwards, it is the least of everyone's worries. Harry certainly is a lot more that he appears, isn't he! I was cheering in my head as I read him releasing a can of magical whoop-a** on those three baddie men. Looking forward to what Severus is going to do to reward little Harry.

Whoops! sorry for the really long review. I just really like the story! It is entertaining and leaves you wanting to read more. Can't wait for the next chapter. Happy writing!
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really love your style of writing.....you really paint a picture for your readers and it's hot as hell.....great job.
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! Poor lads. However, I do like being proved right that leaving them alone was trouble with a capital T!

The pictures you paint are so vivid (which is why my nipples are twinging in horror with sympathy for Blaise).

So Harry still has magic.... interesting! ;) Can't wait for the next chapter. Please don't withold it... I'll cry!