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Severus! I love him so much! Can't want to read more.

wow, that was a really fast update! Course, you have been saying that this is a redo, so I guess the faster updates make sense.

Another fantastic chapter! Ha! They did the deed! I would say that is a most effective way for Severus to confort Harry after the attack. Oh, and I actually snorted out loud at the part 'Did you like that, slave?' 'Did I ever!'. I thought Harry's reaction was hilarious and very sweet. Good forshadowing at the very end of the chapter. A flutter in the abdomen, you say? Hmmmm...methinks Harry might start getting sick in the mornings really soon...

Happy Writing!

*BOUNCES* He finally did it!

I think what I love most about your Severus is that although he's commanding and, as we've already discussed, vindictive, he has those moments where he's burying his face in Harry's hair, or his neck... which make the soppy parts of me extremely happy.

Can't wait for the next update, as ever.

A few notes I took as I was reading (my reactions as it happened):

*smile* Lucius' comment about Severus reminds me that Severus isn't entirely all AU. Its so nice to see him breaking his shell a bit though.
Oh my god, is Severus about to really take Harry? omg omg omg *g*

Haha, Harry's thrashing around is so cute. And Severus' lack of patience is rather amusing.

I'm surprised no one else in the carriage is hearing Harry and Severus getting it on.

Aww, Harry's eagerness and sheer learning ability is so cute! I picture Harry very adorable like but not kid like at all.

Flutter in the stomach? Hmm, could this mean what I think this means?

Thanks again for updating twice in a day!

Oh wow; I am surprised the other carriage passengers didn't wake up to the sounds of Severus and Harry's love making... not that I'm complaining. Haha. Harry is quite eager isn't he? ( I am interested to see what other interactions will arise between the pets).
So I feel a preggers Harry coming on?

(btw: Can't wait to see the movie tonight! I can already tell by the commercials it's going to be great!)

Rather bold move on Draco's part, but I can see where the frustration comes from. xD
I'm curious to see what sort of punishment Lucius comes up with for him.

Great chapter! I am not a fan of incest, but I actually tried to look at it like you said, two actors, and it made it a little easier. I loved Harry and Sev's interaction in the end. Can't wait to see what they're going to do next!

did you take this down and rewrite it because I was looking for the next chapter after snape marked Harry as his own with jewelry.

still love it!

Another update, you spoil us!

Draco is clearly a disaster unto himself... I was surprised that Lucius did it, however.

As for Severus, I think he's just bowled over by such an intriguing slave, rather than having a split personality ;) And who can blame him? I'm not Harry's biggest fan. But I don't want to hurl bricks at him in your fic. ;) I'm as intrigued as Severus!

Can't wait to see where exactly they're headed in that rather lush carriage.

Enjoy the film *be's a lowly Brit who has to wait until tomorrow*

OMG....i love this story so much! I don't normally like Slave!Harry or slave anyone for that matter but somthing about this one has me interested lol keep up the good work and i can't wait for more