rate_review Reviews

This is an excellent (and painful OUCH) Story. It is a twist I haven't read before.

Oh, Severus, why do you fight your emotions so? He really seems to be swaying back and forth with this. Not just internally, but externally as well. He keeps going from telling Harry that he will keep him forever to almost making hints that he could get rid of him soon. I hope he finally accepts his feelings for Harry soon. Very nice chapter. Steamy action, but it also showed just how attached the two are becoming (whether Severus wants it or not)

Harry may just get his wish with the whole baby thing it seems. Although I must say, I was kinda upset by the thought that Harry hoped that there would be the possibility that he be allowed to help raise the baby. Would Severus just turn him into just some baby factory and not let him see the kids? That would be just way too sad and mean! Especially considering how special Harry is.

Sorry. I am getting off on a rant. I do that with good chapters.

Happy Writing!

I love this story! I hope that Sev and Harry end up together. I'm sure Harry is carrying his child what I'm not sure of his how his powers come into play and how he will play out in the whole dark vs. light battle. Amazing job. Cannot wait until the next update ^-^

yay i need more! lol i like harry/snape when Snape kinda starts off as a father figure and well you can go form there lol i would love to read somthing like that

Okay you asked for ways to punish Draco. Since they will be going into or throught a military camp at the border. Binding, placeing a cock ring and blindfolded to serve the needs of the camp with his mouth and no release.

Hot, Hot chapter! I hope they make it safely into Gryffindor! I have so many worries!

I love how Severus is developing feelings for Harry but he is trying to hide it. I hope Harry breaks down his wall and they can be a family like Harry hopes for.

(btw; Did you see the movie?! It was FANTASTIC)

Loved the chapter, and the way Severus is trying to hide/deny what he's feeling for Harry. And so Harry wants Severus' babies... hmmmmm! ;)

And yes, your Harry is infinitely less annoying than most, but it's just me. I've always been the lass that falls for the sidekick, hence why I'm writing Ron and not Harry ;) I like your Harry's willingness to please and learn, and he actually really is quite sweet.

Draco, Draco... hmm. I think maybe he'd benefit from a cock ring, being bound and being the 'practice boy'. If, of course, Severus is man enough to stomach Harry touching someone else.... it'd certainly throw up all his emotions again!

I honestly never thought I would be into a Snape X Harry fanfic...but I stumbled across this amazing story and I have to say if i had to choose whether or not to stumble again I would throw myself instead. Your story is spectacular...and from an avid Draco X Harry fan, I would love to thank you for the Draco kiss scene! >.<

Updates!!!!! I need chapter 17, I promise to bring magical muffins!!!

Believe me when i start to write them you will be the frist one i come to....another great chapter....you keep painting those pictures and i will forever be here.