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for A Slave to a Slave

by LydiasTravel

person Elphaba
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is just such an amazing interesting story. Like the sex too! LOL
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love it and I hope your trip was great and you got the rest you needed.
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oweee. Poor Lucius. *wince* But honestly *shakes head in despair* why would he ever think that was a good idea? *more wincing*

Glad you're back. :-D
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yayay draco decideed to stay with his daddy. glad to see your back we have missed you. another great freaking job.
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited to see another chapter. Thank you. Hope to see more Snarry action soon. Love the story.
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Boy howdy, you weren't just whistling Dixie when you warned us about these chapters.
I must say, they were both excellent. Awesome Harry/Severus lovin. Very intense and erotic.
I had so many phantom pains for Harry after reading both of these chapters, though. Ye-ouch! That is a whole new ballpark of pain right there.
I am glad that Severus comforted him after each set of piercings.

Yay! You put my fears to rest. Severus seems to have decided.
I also really like that Severus wants a family with Harry and wanted to raise kids with him. No baby factory for Harry.
Happy Writing!
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*hits chest in effort to restart it*

Well... if I thought the nipples were painful (thanks for the warning on the ice LOL) then the second chapter you posted... *speechless* But Harry seemed to enjoy it so i'm happy for him ;) And happy for Severus too because he seemed to enjoy it more than everyone. I'm no big fan of MPreg but I do want Voldy to have been wrong here.

And now you're gone until Tuesday. *twiddles thumbs*
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! But I really wonder, if Severus cannot see Harry getting hurt, why does he enjoy it with the piercing and makes Harry suffer more by working so slow?
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I didn't really like how mean Severus was being to Harry. Though I know he said thats the only pain he will get pleasure from the entire time I was like "HOLY HELL OUCH". I did like the end though, Severus will get used to the idea of a child and love it and treat Harry as more then a slave!
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay i was so happy when i saw two updates! lol keep up the good work and i cant wait for more