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Aww, poor Blaise. Being tortured because of Draco's misbehaving.

Ha! Finally a punishment that Draco will not enjoy! I can't wait to see the next part of his punishment.

Well here is another punishment for Draco. Covered in a potion that turns his entire skin into an erogenis zone so that even a breath across his skin is almost over stimulation bind him force him to learn patients as he is intermitently stimulated by passing individuals and is prevented for release.

Lucius' story is a sad one. I hope that it is not the same fate that Draco will have to live with.

Oi! What are you saying about blondes? *is a blonde* *and is also only taking mock offence*

Ouch Town Population: Draco. *wince* Though thanks for the explanation of the sounding rod, I saw Severus mentioning it during the piercing and wasn't sure. Now i'm sure and having phantom sympathy pains. Sometimes ignorance is bliss.

I feel sorry for Blaise just stuck on the floor like that. He always seems to get the raw deal.

Ok, if I couldn't have a Snarry, that was a really good second choice. Excellent.

Wow. You like to cause ghost pains for your readers, don't you? I know that isn't your intention at all, but I must say your warning is very accurate. That seemed very painful. I wonder if this will all be enough to make Draco not act so willfully...doubt it...

Hmmm, me thinks there may be some bad blood coming from Blaise. Jealous perhaps? That kind of thing can only lead to trouble. I hope Blaise does not betray them as an act of spite.

Looking forward to chapter 21!

".............WOW............" that's all i can really say you are a touch sadist aren't you......poor draco and blaise. great chapter though

This is a good story. Interesting idea, captivating characters and a smoothly flowing story.

But I have to admit I'm a little dissapointed with how quikly Harry got over the pain over the piersings, I think he should've suffered more, maybe even gotten a bit ill from such treatment... I know, I'm a demanidng, sadistic and angsty bastard, can't be helped. I've been reading so much angst the couple of days it's rubbed off on me.

And Blaze, I think it would bring a nice little nuance to the story if he gets depressed being the lowest in the threesome, perhaps even so depressed he stops eating or gets ill, so Lucius has to take better care of him, give him more gentle attention.

Well, those are just suggestions, you obviously don't have to use them but I for one would be happy if you did. Or even an altered form of one.

That's all for now, ta ta, have a nice summers end and keep up the good work!

I hope you had a wonderful vacation! I need to get me one of those.

Fantastic chapter. I liked all the insight into the Malfoy family. I thought it was interesting that Lucius was a slave to his father. I am sure more will be explained in later chapters, but I wonder if that is where he got his pension for mixing pain with pleasure. Oh, and about the walking cane. Ouch. That ranks up there with Harry's ouch in chapter 18.

Draco is certainly one for punishment. Lol quite the polar opposite of Harry. You asked if for any ideas about what his punishment should be and honestly...I haven't a clue. Lol guess I am not that creative in this aspect. Considering that he seems to like pain...perhaps something else that isn't physically painful...

Happy writing!

Aww, Draco is so cute. And I like the background on Lucius and his father. It adds quite a bit to the story.