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for A Slave to a Slave

by LydiasTravel

person Makovaso
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, please update soon.
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I feel so sorry for Draco. Its his own fault but still.

And yay, now we're back to Harry and Sev in the next chapter, right? Must confess i've missed them!
person Elphaba
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was an amazing 2 chapters! OUCH!
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Maybe now Draco will straighten up and not be the overconfident slytherin he always. I thought he was leading Harry down a path of disobedience in a few of the chapters every time he said they won't know. Really nice chapter. I have to go out of town this week to take care of my father who had knee replacement surgery. I won't be able to get back to my beloved stories for a whole week. When you post again, don't think I left you. I hope to catch up when I get back and see some Snarry as well as more Draco and Lucius. Keep up the great writing.
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"........WOW........WOW......WOW......" you did it again. great job.
person Hambares
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really do think these last two chapters taught Draco a valuable lesson. He was just not understanding his relationship to Lucius in their arrangement. Now - now - I think he has a much better grasp of it. Hard, yes - tough love, yes - worth it, oh yea!
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I would hope that after all of that, Draco is not going to go outside of his master's wishes any more. We shall have to see though. He so liked to push the boundaries that I think it may be difficult for him to change immediately. I just hope Lucius isn't so harsh the next time. All that whipping made my back hurt. lol.
Aha! You did use psychological punishment as well. Poor Draco. He seems so broken now.

Okay, I am almost convinced now that Blaise isn't the nice, docile slave he appears to be on the outside. He is just so jealous of Draco. I have a feeling he is going to try something. Either to try to get Draco out of the picture, or to get himself higher on that totem pole he keeps talking about and betrays the whole group. Maybe I am just paranoid.

Can't wait for the next chapter! More Snarry...yes?

Happy Writing!
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow! what a punishment!

I don't think I could do all that!, and I like S&M!!!!!!!!

great take on a slave's life.
Keep it going!
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, these updates were awesome!!! Poor Draco and poor Lucius, they both suffer...
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love your story! I am reading this for the snarry so looking forward to the next chap, though this chapter was good to. Update soon!