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for A Slave to a Slave

by LydiasTravel

person Hambares
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Eiwww - Hagrid! That opened my eyes! But oh it was hot when they were all back in the carriage!
person Kat9jr
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved your original version but I really really love this one. I'm interested to see where you take Blaise as a character. keep up the amazing work.
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh noes! I sense a war developing between Blaise and Harry.

And ouch, i knew those bloody piercings would turn out to be no good! *wince* Poor Harry. But, squee, look how caring and doting Sev is getting. Eee. And, for the record, I don't mind whether we see them physically or emotionally together, I don't think it would work without one or the other if you see what I mean. Without Severus' burgeoning emotional moments and Harry's sweetness it'd probably become too much at times. I like seeing both sides of them.

And, cupcakes? Nom. ;)
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Huzzah! This was wonderful. Any kind of Snarry interaction is great in my book. In fact, emotional can be just as good as physical, if not better. Not only was this good Severus/Harry development, but Harry and Draco as well. They seem like they are going to be friends and that Draco is kinda protective over Harry. On that note:

Poor Harry! he keeps on having all these bad things happen to him. I had a friend who developed an allergy to silver and found out the hard way too, except that was only her ears and it was years after she had had them pierced. I hope that he gets better. I have a feeling though that he is going to be even more upset that the piercings were removed than anything else. He was in a near panic when Severus didn't return his plug.

I don't like Blaise. Nope. Not one bit. He is officially on the baddy-man list. It's one thing to be jealous of Draco since he and the blonde both are Lucius's, but he better watch it thinking those bad thoughts about Harry. Grrrr....
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great chapter and I hope Blaze gets what he deserved.
person Elphaba
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Allergic to silver interesting. And me thinks Blaise is a bit jealous. Hope he doesn't take it out on Harry.
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just came back from a mini vacation and I was so happy to find a bunch of chapters waiting for me....keep it up
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think something is brewing with blaize. Love the story keep going.
person Silzar19
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww Poor Harry. Now Blaise will probably start being mean to him because he's stealing the lime light off of him. I like how Harry talked Draco into seeing a different view of his relationship with his father. That his father really does care about him. Though I think the slap to the face and then the almost second one was a little much, but I can see where he's coming from. Update soon
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Apologies for not replying to your question earlier - had disappeared from net world for a while. However, the one you'd come up with is splendid. I don't think I'd have managed to come up with anything quite like it, but it was an enjoyable read.. even if I feel a bit sorry for Draco.