rate_review Reviews

YUMMY! Can't wait for the next chapter. Loved your story with Harry and Draco and am really into Harry/Lucius stories, there aren't any good new ones lately. Your newest fan....ME
P.S. Love your email handle

*Gasps* Harry played footsies! I loved how he thought that was so bad. Silly Harry, footsies are for kids! Lucius will show you much better things. He kinda already did in this chapter. Nice make-out scene. Lucius better get with the program though and not avoid Harry too much. Although, that could lead to a quite adorable attempt at seduction on Harry's part so...maybe it is good that Lucius seems so hesitant. I am torn.

This chapter had just wonderful descriptions in it. From Lucius room, to people's mannerisms, to Harry in the fuzzy white sweater. Hehehe, I like the image of Harry in a fluffy sweater. Like he is a little lamb or something. Hey, that's it! He can be the lamb and Lucius can be the wolf! Ah, you gotta love allegories.

Anyway, I adored this chapter and the characters and plot seem to be coming along beautifully. This is also a pairing that I am pretty unfamiliar with, but you are such a great writer that I may very well get converted to this pairing!

Peace!

Wow. Thats one kiss he will never forget. Lol. Please update soon!

You are becoming one of my favorite authors.

love the start of this!

Howdy again!

I liked Spellbound a lot, so I am very excited to see where this story goes! Already looks like you are off to a running start. Our little Harry already seems to be pretty smitten with Lucius. Methinks living with the Malfoys will be highly interesting for the green eyed teen.
Dude, it is kinda weird since in your last story Ginny was crazy lady. I saw her name and thought, "Run Harry!" but then remembered that this is a whole new story. Whoopsie!

Looking forward to seeing where this new story goes!
Peace

ooooo me likey! for some reason that i can't explain i LOVE this pairing, and i have a feeling this is going to be a very good story.

one thing though, you accidentally change tenses in one sentence. i think it's the one about the dark mark... but it's minor (i do it all the time *hangs head in shame*)

Oooooooo.... Update soon please..... So far I really like it!!

This is a very good start, and I hope to see more soon.
Good beginning and good plot; now all it needs is a little more depth within the chapters.
This isn't a flame, just some light criticism made for a good story so far.