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So happy for you. So now since you have seen the most recent movie the investment we all made in your story doesn't matter any more?

I have just devoured your story and was thrilled until you decided to end it in just a few chapters. This story is more deserving of an actual telling. I believe a couple more chapters would not do it justice at all.

Seduction AND Domination you say? Sounds like fun.

Great chapter, as usual. I enjoyed this chess scene almost as much as the first one.
Poor Lucius just might get a complex about playing the game if that keeps up. Oh, and I also liked that Draco is in on it now as well.
Soon it will be the whole household ganging up on Lucius to get him together with Harry. Oh, the possibilities there.

The bedroom scene was hot, but very frustrating (Much like I am sure both men were feeling at the time, so awesome job setting the mood). They were just to get going and then Lucius had to go and start thinking. *tisk tisk*

Last, but most important...whoa. You want me to be your beta? Seriously? Yea, Sure! I'll give it a go. I've never been a beta before. Sounds exciting.
Here is my e-mail: see_in_color@yahoo. com (I added a space after the dot, just in case. Just delete it when you use it.)

Liking this story more with each chapter! Please update soon!!

I can't wait for the next chapter <3

sorry about not reviewing this but I have been reading other things.

love the chapters!

Whoa, the lamb has a rebellious side! I must say though, I like the image of Harry with piercings. I also like the idea you had of Harry's tattoo. Never really thought about that look for Harry before.

Oh, by the way, the dream--poor Harry. No real action and Ginny teasing him. To top it off, ewwwwww, Umbridge in a string bikini? Forget getting rid of a hard on--Harry is lucky that image didn't make him retract into himself. *Shudders*

Fun chapter! Harry and Ginny's interaction was wonderful. Now we get to sit back and enjoy everyone's reactions to Harry's new look.

You know, Ginny is evil. But she's awsome still. Doing all this for Harry to get on Lucius raidar. Lol. So funny though that she talks to Harry about those things you know. Lol.

Well this chapter was nice, but maybe the tonsil hockey was a bit much.
Oh well, you're the author and its your story.

Well, I'm looking forward to the totally awesome story this is starting to become! There are way too little Harry/Lucius stories around and I am soooo HAPPY that an author is taking up the challenge. I will be looking forward to your next update eagerly. Until then! :)