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for Unexpected Affections

by MysticWitchRini

person gravilove19
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter <3
person Elphaba
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Luc :(
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First of all - Ha! Speaking as a gal from the west myself,
I must say the image of Harry and Lucius in cowboy hats is hilarious!
I have been to many bars like that in my time. Hehehe.

Heck yea! Lucius finally stood up and told Harry he liked him and was simply afraid.
So sad though that he got into the fight! I hope he is okay.

If you want, you can always send me chapters before you post. (~da beta)
person paganwoman
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry if I was misunderstood, the only flame was the one that lit my last cigarette! Love the story and Lucius in a CW bar was a great visual. Kept thinking Urban Cowboy. Truly, love the story and more cookies (and brownies) for you!
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know, I could actually see Lucius getting all death eater and punching some muggle that dared to take something that belonged to him. The guy just oozes sex. Nice chapter.
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. I so love a Harry/Lucius fanfic. Can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I will admit that I have not read your other stories, I just discovered this site. With that said, I would also like to apologize, I meant no disrespect at all. I just became very caught up in your story and I misinterpreted your author's note. I'm excited to see how you are going to end this, because I have faith that it will be perfect. Consider my review turned around.
person paganwoman
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Look, if a little rant is the price we pay for a good story, then rant on! So the plot thickens. Can't wait to see what they have in store for ol' Lucius! Keep up the good work and Keep on Ranting!!!
Love and Kisses (and Chocolate Chip Cookies with M&Ms) P.W.
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! What a twist! Poor Lucius. Man, James is a jerk! Kinda makes sense now that Lucius tends to go through lovers, though. That sort of thing tends to leave its mark, whether a person realizes it or not. So is this the actual reason that Lucius doesn't want to be with Harry? Cause he looks like James and is just covering it up with the Voldemort excuse? I hope the two can work it out!

Well, boss, I am working on the previous chapters. Lol I have hit a snag with my word processor. I will hopefully have it to you by tomorrow. Then you can send me the new stuff. Sorry it is taking so long! I will try not to let you down.
person Elvira
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this! So sad, poor Lucius. And James cheated omn Lily? Shame on you James.