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Oh wow,James really is a total twat. Poor Lucius...
I do hope he treated Lilly better!

Already a fan, Darlin'! You don't gotta tell me twice! Love this little Harry/Lucius bit you did. Gotta love the Dark with the Light.

Can't wait for chapter 9!!!

Hey, like this story, but is it finished???
If not, where is the rest?

I loved this story! I adore this pair!!!!! I felt bad for Harry when he was once again compared to his father's past, but I loved how it ended.
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Yay! The saying goes that 'it is better to end with a bang than a whimper', but after reading your last chapter for this story, I think we can modify that to, 'its better to end with banging and whispers'. (People boo at lame joke) Ok, ok, ok. Sorry. Had to say it.
Great ending. I was not expecting Harry to be the agressor in the end. Nice surprise. Huzzah for the silk tie!


*Looks sheepish* sorry about not getting the chapters. I have been busy with a new job and it slipped my mind. I will try to get them done and send them to you this morning. I'm sorry for the delay.

I really like where this story is going, and I look forward to reading more of it. However, I would suggest being more careful with your grammar. for example, make sure you capitalise 'I' every time, rather than just at the beginning of sentences. also, some of your sentences could flow better. A good way to check the flow of your sentences is to read them aloud to yourself, that way you can tell whether they make sense or not, or if you can change them to make them sound better!

I hope these tips help you to improve an already great story, and I look forward to the next chapter!!!

ohhhhh, me thinks the next chapter is going to be quite steamy!
Will Lucius tie Harry up with his Hair ribbon again? Hope so. *Crosses fingers and toes*
very nice interaction. I am glad Lucius came clean with Harry. Huzzah for emotional understanding!

On a beta note - I will copy this and work on it and get it back to you as soon as I can! :)

Yummy, but what a place to end it!!

I LOVE this fic. You're right, I havent read many good Harry/Lucius fics, definitely none as sweet as this. Keep going, this is brilliant.