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for Hattie, Dear

by BeaBibliophile

person sarlanda
schedule September 6, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Great story! Especially the three hundred galleon slacks and "dastardly".

schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Lucius is such a bastard, and we love it. Hee!
person alecto
schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooh so fabulous
good sexual energy - exquisite spanking scene. a spanking scene well done is always SUCH a treat to find.
person T Stevenson
schedule July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Scarybearhair referred me to your lovely little oneshot! Poor Harriet, here she was just trying to help Lucius Malfoy follow the rules of one hour lunches and he turns it into a case of insubordination, the cad. Well, what can anyone expect, this is Lucius Malfoy and I'm pretty sure he'd be able to turn any situation to his advantage. What the heck happened in the two weeks that turned her around to following only Malfoy's rules, I'm sure it was a very "HOT" two weeks! Lovely job Bea, I'm off to read your story, Promises.
schedule July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM

I might have known Lucius had another reason for his late lunches. He's certainly broken that rule-ridden Hattie out of her self-imposed prison of regulations. How do they cope if anyone comes to see him at his office? It's funny how people who are too tightly wound in one direction often break free only to go too far in the other direction - as though they have no true sense of normal behavior innately. This was one hot, salacious little tale. The ruler on Hattie's privates was steamy. Ouch!
schedule July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Squee! Oh Bea this is excellent! I absolutely love it. You always write Lucius so deliciously.

You are so funny too, 'orgasmic diplomatic abilities'. Who does he think he
person dragon88
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah the secretary! Such a great film and this is a such a good little oneshot, I like the characters' similarity to Mr Grey and Lee whilst having their own personalities :P * thumbs up*