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July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 5!!! Can Harry help him?
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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Normally, I keep well away from stories that include torture, since I cry very easily and am WAY too compassionate of fictional characters (it's even worse with real people!). However, I have read quite a few of your stories, and I know that you wouldn't leave your readers to wallow in the torture for too long, so I decided to make an exception. I'm very glad I did!
Werewolves are quickly becoming my most favourite magical creatures, and the way you've described their mentality so far just tickles me pink. Wolves are very beautiful creatures, and I have story ideas involving them, but the wrong person writing can twist that. You, quite obviously, are not one of those wrong writers. Honestly, I'd like to give constructive criticism, but I can't really think of anything that you need to improve on. I really, truly hope Draco chokes down his pride and tell Harry what's going on, so Harry's pack can go sic Lucius. I'd like to see Hyacinth dig those jaws into that mad asshat....
Werewolves are quickly becoming my most favourite magical creatures, and the way you've described their mentality so far just tickles me pink. Wolves are very beautiful creatures, and I have story ideas involving them, but the wrong person writing can twist that. You, quite obviously, are not one of those wrong writers. Honestly, I'd like to give constructive criticism, but I can't really think of anything that you need to improve on. I really, truly hope Draco chokes down his pride and tell Harry what's going on, so Harry's pack can go sic Lucius. I'd like to see Hyacinth dig those jaws into that mad asshat....
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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 4!!! Lucius thinks Draco looks better? Draco has resigned himself to dying? Why not just ask Harry for help?
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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay! i was hoping you would say that...the way they made lupin look in the movie..well was just weird..lol...i always think of werewolves as actualy wolves only bigger more powerful
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... Draco, he hurts me so deep inside, I wanna cry. BOY get a GRIP and GET OUT. Sheesh... I wonder if he'll go back again (well, of course he will..) but what Harry will see then. Hmmm..
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just can't imagine harry as a werewolf. He's so tiny, he'd be more of a cub.
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. I am loving this story. You just can't help but feel for Draco and rail at him for not tell Harry what is happening to him. I hope that Harry figures it out and finds a way to help Draco. Till then I will sit here with bated breath waiting for the next chapter.
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gosh Harry, please do something. It's so heartbreaking, how he has someone dying right in front of him, and doesn't realize. If he would just remember the state Draco was in when he first arrived, and put two and two together. If Lucius keeps this on, there won't be much left for anyone to save.
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #3...
Well, I'm glad that 'somewolf' in Harry's pack has the intelligence [wild as
it is] to see behind Draco's mask. Maybe we'll get somewhere...
As I read this, it just occured to me you're doing another of your horror
stories, but it's slightly toned down...as of now.
Just warn somebody when you decide to go sadistic. :-)
..or maybe not, a little shock never killed anybody.
Well, I'm glad that 'somewolf' in Harry's pack has the intelligence [wild as
it is] to see behind Draco's mask. Maybe we'll get somewhere...
As I read this, it just occured to me you're doing another of your horror
stories, but it's slightly toned down...as of now.
Just warn somebody when you decide to go sadistic. :-)
..or maybe not, a little shock never killed anybody.
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July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, totally didn't know what to make out of the summary, but saw that you're the author and started reading anyway ... and loooved :D Can't wait for more!