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for Underneath the Underneath

by dirtydarella

schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol i loved the ending!
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this! The whole "being able to see magic" thing is a great plot idea. And I loved Ron and Hermione's hesitation and uncomfortable-ness (is that even a word?) catching Draco and Harry in the library. I think you captured the build up of feelings between the two of them very nicely in your writing.
person Juana13
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story!!!! absolutely loved it!! such a happy ending. : )
is there more? ooh, i hope there is...
eleven stars!!! : )
schedule July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
0.0 nooooo! not fin!! I need more!! please please please??? *pouty*
schedule July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was very good! omg, they snuck in as ANIMALS! very creative, I'm favoriting this now!

xoxo
The SIlverkitten
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! Very good writing.

I liked how Draco was so possessive of Harry, and how Harry was so trusting of Draco.
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Continue!!!! I love this!!!
person Polka dot
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Odd place to end it, but I love my Draco/Harry fics and this one has some suspense.
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I give it an A+ it was a wonderful story heheheh loved how the deatheaters got in