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by RynStar15

schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, this chapter felt very confusing on the first read. I couldn't figure out what was going on half the time-- and then I tried putting myself in Hermione's perspective. Oh yeah, duuuh! She's blind, of course it's going to feel disorienting; she doesn't know what's going on!

Well done, and shame on me for not paying closer attention!
High-fives to Draco for kissing her.
person jaceni50
schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Can't wait until the next update. :)
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH, no! I just found this, you can't leave it like that!!!!
person kazfeist
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another cliffie! But at least Hermione wasn't with Lucius, right? :D
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my GOD!!!!!!!! Tissue alerts please........ Feelings reveal.. Nicely done. More please.
person Robs
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Argh! A cliffie! So, Ginny has Draco sussed out. He really does care for Hermione. Wtf is Remus talking about? Draco's right; that's the kind of stuff you expect from the other side. So what's happened to Draco? And were they right about Hermione being at her parents? Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my....*bites nails nervously*
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have a feeling what this is going to be about but i what to know first please keep going i love it.
person stray523
schedule August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gasp! What a wicked place to leave off at! Now i just HAVE to keep reading this to find out what happened to Hermione's parents. As if I could stop reading this story anyway, lol. Can't wait for the next update, I'm really liking it so far.
person Robs
schedule August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Evil, evil cliffie! Brilliant chapter. I'm glad they're getting on better now. They seem very much like a dysfunctional family in some ways. I wonder what is in that letter... Look forward to the next chapter!