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i still really like your story keep up the awesome work!!

This is a wonderful update! :D
Sorry I haven't reviewed in sometime, sci-tracked with so many hp slash fics and etc. to read heh.
I think the story's getting excellent.
Go Alice! Matchmaker! :D

i love it!!!!. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Bravo, Bravo, Great Chappy, can't wait for the next one that I can read.

Damn you Fork Cuisine you have seduced me with your awesomness. Your story is in my top five HP/Twilight faves (your number two). I just love it and despise Bella Swan with every fiber of my being, personally I'm team Jacob all the way. But damnit if Eddy doesn't make the cutest seme. You are my main competition for Harry Potter crossovers, here I am reading and reviewing your story when I'm suppose to be updating mine, you are a good distraction. Everytime I come on the site I read your story, you make my day. Maybe oneday when I've finished writing my stories I'll sit down and write a HP/Twilight. But for now Resident Evil awaits. Update very soon please, or I'll send Wesker after you.

Well actually this was my first fanfic with a crossover with Cullens and i wanted to see if i could get interested in it. However it seems, like i said before, i am a bella fan through and through. So i could try read this crossover again, but i am still fond of bella so i might not.

I am glad my pointers didn't offend you, most people i tend to give pointers to rarely seems to get it that there is a line between flaming and giving pointers.

You know what would be really hot? Harry/Edward/Jacob. *drools until dehydrated*

this is the first ever crossover fic i read and i just want to say great job. i have read all 14chapters in the past 2 hours and now i am craving more, please say youl update soon

I am now going to list a few things you may have to think about, you can read it if you want to but do not complain if you are not satisfied, because if you did not want critics to comment on your work, you should not encourage us to comment.

OK I tried to read this but somehow I just couldn't help but feel that you were always telling us in beforehand what was going to happen. Like when the food is eatable for Edward. You basically used a whole chapter telling us, via Harry and Sirius conversation what was going to happen. You need to understand that we, the readers, enjoy being surprised; you could have therefore surprised us with Edward eating AND then used up a chapter telling us why it was possible. Because by telling us in beforehand it makes it boring, because we already knows what

Wha! I'm very glad that I stumbled onto a few of your fics and decided to keep reading. You constantly have great ideas, plot-wise and pairing-wise. Love the interaction between Edward and Harry (yay romance!) and Jacob and Harry (keep Sirius and Remus away for the night.. *snerk*). All in all, wonderful update, and I can't wait to read more.