rate_review Reviews

Good chapter!

I'm really loving this story!!!

Ne....i really like this story. I am not a big fan of Twilight books or the movie but i am a big fan of the characters because i enjoy listening to my friends describe each and everyone without being really critical. I am an avid Potter fan though. And i am very critical on how ppl portray the characters in their stories so i make sure i read all warnings before i start. anyways.... i am definitely enjoying this story and i was wondering if you cam email me when you update so i won't have to hunt down the story to see if it's been updated. Appreciate it. Thank you.

unbelieveable.nyj@gmail.com

Awwww, Edward wants to jump Harry, but in a good way, not the I want to kill you way!!!! Wonderful chapter!

Away Bella! Edward doesn't like you!

I thought Edward and Harry will meet in this chappie... oh well, next one for sure!... I hope..

I've a;ways enjoyed your writing. Your that amazing.
Thank you for sharing that with us...
But I do have a question for you, two actually...
One, are the chapters always going to be this short or is it just because it is the beginning of the story?
And two... Where is Ron?
Thanks!!! and...
PLEASE
PLEASE
PLEASE
update soon!

Wow...i love this so far...Can't wait for more

Great start I can't to read more. i'd love to be added to your alert list my e-mail address is abyangurase@yahoo.com

I like how you've started. It is very original. I can't wait to see how you explain Bella's change in scent.... The Disgusting Smell is usually associated with the Shifters.... She had an affair with one of the unmated wolves and was able to get rid of the scent before any of the Cullen's could smell it on her, but is now preggers(accounting for the smell) and hormones are getting the best of her(which would account for the change in attitude).... and the only reason she doesn't leave Edward is because she loves his money.....

lol

Anyways, I like the story and can't hardly wait until Harry and Edward start interacting!!!!

Kudos!

~BL

I love the new chapter yay! edward saw a glimpse of harry can't wait to see whats gonna happen next :)