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I really liked this chapter. I liked how stunned Harry was by Edward and also how Harry reacted to how Edward's prying. Honestly, what business does he have rifling through other peoples' minds?! I can't wait to see how the next chapters go! I'm especially looking forward to Harry and Esme's cooking lessons.

May inspiration and free time flow,
Cari Marie

ps- thanks so much for the email update!

Awesome!! they finally meet!!

Great chapter, I can't wait to read more!

Glad you updated. :)
Bella's quite the little bitch, glad Edward dumped her ass and ooo can't wait until he meets Harry.
Lovely work.

i love the story so far. could you put me on your alert for the story updates. my email address is dsuciu77@yahoo.com

I love this story. Please update ASAP. I want to know what happens in the first Harry/Edward meet-and-greet.

This is so different that I LOVE it. It is well written and so far very entertaining. More soon.

This story looks really cool! I like the reason you have the Harry Potter gang move to Forks. I am soo tired of the whole "hiding out in Forks because it's the last place people would look" plot. It is severely overused, and not well. I like how you have Harry opening up a restaurant. I think it is a unique idea. I find it very intriguing. I can't wait to see some Edward/Harry action, but I suppose I'll just have to be patient.

The only critque I have is that you forgot to add the pairing Ron/Hermione. It's totally not a big deal, but since you added in the canon Twilight pairings, I thought you might might want to add the canon in the Harry Potter ones too.

May inspiration and free time flow,
Cari Marie
theonetruebeliever@gmail.com

ps-Will you add me to the update list?

Aww and here I thought it'll be this chapter that they'll meet *pout*

Can't wait for the next one!! Hurry hurry! hehe

Aww so close. I thought they were going to finaly meet this chap. Oh well.