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by Vampirezdarkgurl

schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... That foul odor, a thought popped in my head, do you think she's sleeping with Jacob... or prego?? Don't know why that happened to 'explain' it for me. I know I'm totally wrong but :)
Dahlias
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cool! I'm happy to see that you've updated again. It really made my day. I am rather anxious about this cliff hanger. Maybe next time you can hold off on them until you know you can update regularly... It will torture me to not have the answer. I did enjoy how Edward and Jacob were sort of getting along. It think it was much more in character that you didn't have them instantly get along or become best friends. Kudos!

May inspiration and free time flow,
Cari Marie
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
another Great chappy, thanks, also love the cliff hangers it keeps me wanting more.
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi :]

I loooove the story! I would like to please be added to the alert list :]


My email is

Taylorann1991@hotmail.com
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What! so bella just got away because she's drunk?? No fair! Harry was hit in the face! grrrr!!
schedule August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WolfPup5683@aol.com

(please let me know when you update, thanks.
person Kiyo_Cub
schedule August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooh could you please send me an email as well when you update?? This story is just perfect! I love HP, I love Edward and I can't stand Bella, finally she's taken down a peg ;-)
I believe you'll be able to see my email-address above, if not I'll be checking regularly for an update and I'll leave my email-address again :)
schedule August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i for got to updaate last time thank you for the update i so love this story i hope everything works out i m happy that harry has all his friendsand that now one is out to get him other than bella
person cagna4
schedule August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
still a great story and hope you update soon.
schedule August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated! I was thrilled when I saw you had updated! I enjoyed the confrontation between Edward and Bella. I can't help but feel anxious about what will happen when Edward gets her home.... I also thought that the Weasley interlude was interesting and a nice break. I applaud your efforts! xD

May inspiration and free time flow,
Cari Marie