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July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow amazing work so far. loved all the 5 chapters. Your writing style is amazing and very easy to read and I just love how you have expressed and explained each characters and how you have developed the plot so far. Cant wait for more. Keep up the good work/
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
I love Petunia and Dudley in this fic. They're different, but not CRAZY different to the point where it becomes cheesy. One thing- Petunia is a bit.. lackluster in character- she could use just a bit more personality and a little less history. Although, I love Petunia's "powers"- the seer thing is actually a very original idea (and a wonderful future plot device), and I'm very impressed. Heh, Harry should give Petunia his Divination books (it's not like he's ever going to use them again).
About Harry.... I feel like he's a little too... perfect. It would be nice if you brought out a few of his flaws- make him seem a little more human.
I loved the part where Harry "came out of the closet" so to speak. Very nicely done. I would love to see some exploration into Harry's relationships with his close friends. Especially Ron, who didn't really give his opinion of homosexuality.
Oh, by the way, Hermione and Ginny have been acting a bit like fangirls- and while it make for a cute, and very funny scene, you should be careful to give their characters depth.
I also quite like your original character- Alexi. He and Dudley make a very cute match, and he seems to have a well thought out personality.
I can't wait for the main pairing of the story!!!!!!
Much Love
Sweet Wisteria
I love Petunia and Dudley in this fic. They're different, but not CRAZY different to the point where it becomes cheesy. One thing- Petunia is a bit.. lackluster in character- she could use just a bit more personality and a little less history. Although, I love Petunia's "powers"- the seer thing is actually a very original idea (and a wonderful future plot device), and I'm very impressed. Heh, Harry should give Petunia his Divination books (it's not like he's ever going to use them again).
About Harry.... I feel like he's a little too... perfect. It would be nice if you brought out a few of his flaws- make him seem a little more human.
I loved the part where Harry "came out of the closet" so to speak. Very nicely done. I would love to see some exploration into Harry's relationships with his close friends. Especially Ron, who didn't really give his opinion of homosexuality.
Oh, by the way, Hermione and Ginny have been acting a bit like fangirls- and while it make for a cute, and very funny scene, you should be careful to give their characters depth.
I also quite like your original character- Alexi. He and Dudley make a very cute match, and he seems to have a well thought out personality.
I can't wait for the main pairing of the story!!!!!!
Much Love
Sweet Wisteria
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July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story of yours is great. :)
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July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter
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July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry... But things have to get worse before they get better...
Anyway, an odd pairing for Harry, one I've never really seen before. I hope they get together soon =)
Anyway, an odd pairing for Harry, one I've never really seen before. I hope they get together soon =)
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July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story! Please update soon!
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July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story so far. I look forward to reading more.
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July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far, plus I am interested in the pairing!!!! Keep the good work coming!