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July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great 1st chapter.
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July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A story that has a chance of staying R/G and H/Hr? Yay!
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July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, good story on 'Practice'. Hope ya will put male and female slash. If no slash, can just straight people. Anyway, hope can include anal-play with sex organ, finger, mouth, and tonue of both female and male from opposite sex. Can include in story if having anal play, it is dirty or not. Dirty as little or not dirty at all nothing in anal and on surface of anal. Can include anal-cock-blow job. AFter anal sex.
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July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was really good. I really like what you've done to this fic. ^_^
My one problem is your summary line. Writing an intro summary, believe it or not, is what pulls the readers in. It's like the back of a book. If the story summary doesn't catch your eye...you're not going to read it. So to write down that you don't need one and assuming that everyone is familiar with your work seems a little too sure of yourself. I understand you've written allot of stories, had to click on your profile to see, but even so some of us have yet to be familiar with your work. And so...it just comes off a bit presumptuous on your part. I hope you don't take it that wrong way, hun. I'm only saying this because I've already made a few blogs about it and made a poll about fanfic reader pet peeves and THIS one came as one of the five.
In fact...I've already received a few private IMs from some online friends of mine telling me to check your fic out. And not because of the fic...but because they were highly amused by the tone of your summary. Some of them had compared it to the infamous. "I suck at summaries."
Again...I hope you don't take it the wrong way and use it as constructive criticism because your writing is that amazing. =)
Looking forward to your next update,
Lexy Malfoy
My one problem is your summary line. Writing an intro summary, believe it or not, is what pulls the readers in. It's like the back of a book. If the story summary doesn't catch your eye...you're not going to read it. So to write down that you don't need one and assuming that everyone is familiar with your work seems a little too sure of yourself. I understand you've written allot of stories, had to click on your profile to see, but even so some of us have yet to be familiar with your work. And so...it just comes off a bit presumptuous on your part. I hope you don't take it that wrong way, hun. I'm only saying this because I've already made a few blogs about it and made a poll about fanfic reader pet peeves and THIS one came as one of the five.
In fact...I've already received a few private IMs from some online friends of mine telling me to check your fic out. And not because of the fic...but because they were highly amused by the tone of your summary. Some of them had compared it to the infamous. "I suck at summaries."
Again...I hope you don't take it the wrong way and use it as constructive criticism because your writing is that amazing. =)
Looking forward to your next update,
Lexy Malfoy
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July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dear Guitar Guru
Thank you for the new story hope you have some new idea's for Keeing in the Family PT2. I haven't read a word of tis stor yet but im sure it will be great because all your work is.
Thank you for the new story hope you have some new idea's for Keeing in the Family PT2. I haven't read a word of tis stor yet but im sure it will be great because all your work is.
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July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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