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for The Boys Who Lived

by IamaSlashAddict

person Faery66
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE write more on this story. Thank you
person Jorge
schedule September 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Incredible story I'm addicted please review. MY only comment is that you not using quotation marks and puntuation marks it makes it hard to read the story other than that fantastic story.
person Koizumi Romi
schedule July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ack! I love your story, I really do, but this chapter and the last chapter turned out WEIRD. it's not the content, it's just that the last chapter had letters where the punctuation should have been, and this chapter has weird-ass symbols where the punctuation should be. I'm not sure if this is a problem on my end or if it's actually like thaf, but it did kind of ruin the chapters for me, and despite the well-written smut, it kind of ruined their first time together.
schedule April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story but the is something wrong in the last chapter in the letter that Percy sent to Ron the talks about Harry trial for underage use of magic but in the whole story you didn't put that part os the book 5 and Harry was always away with Cedric and a the day of his birhday he already was away from privet drive!! wat he did so that he needed to go to trial?? I hope you update soon!!
person Suntitan
schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Are you still writing this story?
person Jeezabel
schedule July 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your fanfic kicks ass and I love it but I was wondering one thing why hasn't Cedric noticed Harry's hand yet, I would have figured he would have noticed by now with all the time Harry and him spend together.
schedule July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

I like your story and I want to read the last two chapters as well, but they were badly formatted and therefore unpleasant to read. It would be nice if you corrected that (unless it's my computers fault I'm seeing the chapters like that...).

Thanks
Fruehling
person chadg919
schedule May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Harry and Cedric fics amaze me so. Keep up with this one its amazing
person Bryce
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omggggg. I love this story so much.
The relationship you have going between Harry and Cedric is adorable.
Please, for the love of god, continue writing this story or I'll be greatly disapointed. =(
A huuuuuuge fan,

Bryce. :D
person Jan
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Looooooooooove it!

Please update chapter 11 soon ^_^

Jan