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for Coveted Persecution

by Lissa1011

person Tenar10r
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting so far
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading more. I am a bit confused though, at the bottom of this chapter, you say completed in five chapters. However in the listing, it says it is already complete.
person use2b2t2
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Is this completed. If not, I would look forward to additional chapters
Mare
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent story. I hope that you decide to change this from a completed story to a little bit longer one. There are way too many unanswered questions. Who left the book on Hermione's patio? Is Hermione going to Hogwarts to talk about finishing her education? Will Hermione break up with Ron?
Since this also involves Snape wanting revenge on those who left him for dead, I think that you need to show that he is doing things to Ron and Harry as well.
person Chyara
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There's two chapters here. My blood is pounding. Where's there rest if it is complete as the summary says?
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is awsome, please write another chapter soon!!
person didi
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great start. please continue
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Freakin' sweet! That gave me chills. Can't wait to read more.
person Angie30
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh this story is so good, it gives me the chills. I always wondered why nobody went back for Snape's body after the battle was over or why they didn't try and help him. I know they were just students back then but surly Hermione being so smart could have tried something to save him. Excellent job, I'm so hoping you continue with this story.
person MooMandy
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, yay! When did you sneak this little gem in? Bravo, doll!