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for Coveted Persecution

by Lissa1011

person Persy
schedule August 24, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Awwww, come on now!!!!!

person Persy
schedule June 13, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Oh my gosh!!! Loved it from beginning to end! 

person Killer Kadoogan
schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooo... I like it! I like it! Always thrilled to see new work from you, dear! Hope to see more soon! A huge fan as always - Killer K :D
person chyara
schedule October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what an interestingly dark fic.

Have you considered doing a sequel?

I wonder what would happen to Hermione if she became pregnant. Would she run? Would she snap out of it, and turn the tables on Snape?
person geeklee
schedule October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
amazing story! so full of tension and emotion. i usually like stories with a lucid snape - good or bad is not as important. but your snape has lost it (understandably) as well as hermione. they fit each other perfectly. i prefer your epilogue ending. more complete as a story. fabulous work.
person Mmajere
schedule August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a cliffie at the end of your last chapter. Yes, it's fair to say
that many are waiting.
person Anon
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely awesome! I really hope you write some more like this because I love this type of story. Would have been interesting to see if the intensity would be held if it was a bit longer with a bit more naughtiness and revenge from Snapey. Lol But all together it was amazing! I hope you write more. :D

V xxx
person Anon
schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hot... hot... HOT.

schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful story. I enjoyed reading it.
person MooMandy
schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm... hot!!! What a cool ending! Write more when you can! Always a pleasure! Killer K