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I think this was a great ending...maybe all it needs is an epilogue..so we can see how eveyone ended up

hi there. I wanted to say that I have read this whole story and found it to be very sweet. I love OOC Snape and AU stories, so it was right up my street, especially the happy ending!

I hope you don't mind some constructive critisism? You really do need a Beta. There were more than a few errors in each chapter, (spellings and grammar), that did distract from the story for me. It was such a shame, because I was enjoing it, then suddenly a mis-spelt word or the wrong tense was used and it threw me out again. Also, if you're writing HP fiction you need to check the HP Lexicon on line for correct spellings - it's Wizengamot, not Wizengamut.

I would be happy to Beta for you if you like? I'm no expert, but I could brush it up a bit? email me if you want my help: neelix_2000@yahoo.com

This was wonderful. I think that maybe an epilogue would finish this story. That way the readers would know if Severus and Hermione had children. Also you could tell about Hermione's friends. Did they ever visit her? Do they hate her for marrying Severus? Do they have families of their own?

you better not stop!!!!!!!!!! this is a good story..and i love this side of Snape...i can just picture him holding his daughter in his large hands. the sceene from gone with the wind" Rhett Butler holding his daughter for the first time" that is my image of Snape...make it so number one...lol..now post dang it...

I would like to see more...even if it is an eplogue.

A wonderful story. I would love for it to continue, but it isn't really necessary for the plot. A sequel would be fun though.

I really think you should continue the story, they have so much potential together. Well done!

oh pllleeeeeeasseee continue! you're story is fantastic!

Brilliant updates!

delightful story