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July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting indeed! How long before the pressure gets to them, and when do we see her side of the story? I can hardly wait!
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July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this alot. I'm very interested to know how you're going to have her take it. Hope you write more soon.
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July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I found a few errors and thought I'd help you by pointing them out.
firstly, instead of three year olds i think you mean to say third years.
when you put 'more greater', that is grammatically incorrect. it is simply 'greater'.
There is no such word as 'shooked'.it is just 'shook'.
where you put 'beeing' it should say 'being'
Other than that, there are relatively few spelling errors and the whole thing is better written than some people on here who claim english as their only language!
This story looks promising and I look forward to reading more soon. If you need any more help, especially with British English, don't hesitate to ask!
firstly, instead of three year olds i think you mean to say third years.
when you put 'more greater', that is grammatically incorrect. it is simply 'greater'.
There is no such word as 'shooked'.it is just 'shook'.
where you put 'beeing' it should say 'being'
Other than that, there are relatively few spelling errors and the whole thing is better written than some people on here who claim english as their only language!
This story looks promising and I look forward to reading more soon. If you need any more help, especially with British English, don't hesitate to ask!