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for Carnal Afflictions

by GlitterKitten

schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Um, yes to the proper summary, but boy am I glad it's more than a one-shot now. lol I admit to being intrigued about what's going to happen next, so feel free to hurry. lol Thanks, hon! HG4eva
person alosbour
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm God I'm loving this story. So many juicy lemons and its still totally captivating. Love where you're going with it, please post more soon.
~khemicale
person Anon
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What the? Splutters indignantly!! Noooooooooooooooo! You can't stop it there just when things were getting interesting. How dare you!!!! LOL

Dang that was hot. I feel like I've been left hanging. LMAO I'm gonna hex whomever just walked through that door (even if it is Draco). Loved that Hermione was raving on about the condition Draco left her in at the library. It was bloody lucky no-one caught her in an indelicate postion. And oh to cum so hard one faints! (I will not be jealous of a fictional character! I will not be jealous of a fictional character!) Bloody mantra never works!! I just can't believe it was Blaise she was confessing it too. Still, he wouldn't be a Slytherin if he didn't take advantage of the situation and damn if it wasn't one heck of an advantage. Yep, definitally going to hurt whomever walked in and interrupted 'my fun'. Of course, Blaise might need a little relieving now so I'm happy to vounteer my services. LOL ;) And if Margaritama is reading this story as well, I reckon she'll have a say about what you just did too. (and what I just said for that matter) LMAO

Oh yay, if my review got us another chapter then I sure hope this one does too. And I'm just as pleased I brought a smile to your face. My job is done! :)
person mhaj78
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i liiiike it!!! short and sweet and to the point! awesome. keep up the good work!
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohh that was very sexy i loved it i cant wait for the next chappie!!

x cat :]
person Anon
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, so much to love here. :) The sex is hot and definitely more-ish. There's a little background to go with it and the promise of a proper story yet to unfold and you even have a flirtatiouc Blaise in there. I don't know what it is about me but I do so love to read about a rough shag in the library and that did not disaapoint either. I look forward to whatever you have next. Pity Draco won't share Hermione with Blaise but as she said, it was none of his business. More please! :)
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hhhmm...a jealous Malfoy, perhaps? Loving it. Update soon!
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW! His last words had me wanting more. please write soon
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That is amazing. I cant wait for more!
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
isn't he all possessive all of a sudden.