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I Truly enjoy this fic. The interaction between all the characters are beleivable even in this fantasy setting. It's also a very different concept than a "typical" fan fictioon, very origional and i LOVE reading something that doesn't bore me within the first 3-4 chapters (latley that seems like it happens more and more often) I hope you continue to update, even if it's slowly. As for constructive critisism or input...I am starting to feel like "Cyrus" aka Harry, is becoming a little static, though i can see that you are starting to give him the realization that something is kinda missing on the personal front (his detachment from his bed lover and feeling that something is not quite right or how it was ment to be) I feel a bit like he should start making some more mature decisions at this point... starting to "grow" a little more emotionaly and intellectualy,as well as take more of an interest in the politics he seems to become embroiled in so easily. However... with this New summer training you've mentioned it looks like he might start moving in that direction. PLease, Please continue to wright, even if you don't take my advice or are already planning in that direction to begin with.. I REALLY enjoy this story, and have seen WAY to many fictions abandoned by the way side. (I still have some bookmarked froma year or 2 ago hoping i'll see another chapter posted)

-sincerely
Nicole

Loved :D Great chapter!

I adore this fix! This is my second time through. I was so happy when I came back and had 6 new chapters to read. I really look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

I was so happy to see your update that I almost cried, literally. Your intricate use of detail is astounding. *Bows down before your wisdom* GOD!!! I loved this chapter, like always. I can't wait to see what happens between Cyrus and Ashawyn!!!! Including how Cyrus survives through the rest of the year. Can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!

I just read your AN in chapter 23. I admit that I'm one of those who didn't review after the popping of Cyrus's cherry, as you put it. Reason was not the smut itself, but the fact that I really dislike (hate) Ashawyn, and he took all the fun out of it for me. Sorry, I can't get myself to like him even a little bit.

I am currently on chapter 10 of your story and I am in love! This is a fabulous story and I cannot wait to get caught up to the end. But there is something that came to my attention. When Harry first put up the lights in his room to remove the shadows in his room you wrote that he had also put lights under his bed but in chapter 10 you state that the reason Tara was able to get into his room was by the shadows under his bed and that Harry needed to put lights under there. But there are lights because he put them there earlier in the story (couldn't tell you what chapter), so yeah. either there are lights and you should figure out a different way she's getting into Harry's room or you should go take the reference to the light + under bed out.

Ok I'm re-reading after I handed over my other book to you ...have I ever told you, you are a cruel and evil minded person?

This story is amazing! And I hate that it isnt finished, I dont normaly read wips since I hate not beeing able to read the whole thing at once. But this one I just can't reseist. But I do try to stay away as long as possible to be able to read several chapters at a time.
Do you write any original fiction?

YES!! YES!! YES YES YES!!! YESYESYESYES!!!!!! I bow down to your in gratitude for posting another chapter. It was like I was thirsty and the only thing near me was a dried out well. So I am ecstatic to see that there is another chapter!!!!! Now onto the other part. OH GOD!! OH GOD !!! OH GOD!!! It is just one thing after another with Cyrus isn't it? And the way your write keeps me totally captivated (which I might add is sometimes a hard thing to do). It is like you have chained me down, wouldn't let me go until sadly it ended too soon, and I loved every minute of it. Are we going to see Yalmereith(incredibly sorry if I spelled it incorrectly)? I kinda miss him.And the plot *thickens*!!! Now Cyrus has a killer after him(not including Voldemort I mean)? I cannot wait to see what Cyrus' illness is(if it has a name), who the killer is, and anything else that happens to Cyrus!!!

Enjoyed plenty :D