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Hey,

I know I'm not an official member of this website and all, but I do frequent it quite often. I've been waiting for the past 2 to 3 months for the next chapters of this story.

It is my favorite story of all time (thus far), and since I've been surfing this site for around 6 years that is saying something. I'll write something more helpful after I actually read the next two new chapters.

I just wanted to say how stoked I am that you've released new chapters!!!

VVeitch

OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was so totally worth the wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!I am completely speechless right now. Well, obviously not COMPLETELY speechless but I am pretty sure you know what I am mean. DAMN!!! That was gooood!!!!! I can't get over how....how...how...I don't even think there is a word that exists that conveys how spectacular I think this story is. I am pretty sure i am going to be singing your praises for the next couple of days. You just made my super crappy week better. Better than better, you made it fricking amazing!!!! Dang girl, made a huge assumption here by assuming you are a girl. Incredibly sorry if you aren't. Then it should be Damn boy, you got some serious talent!!! If you are able to tell us what name you are publishing under that would be great!!!! I seriously hope you can, cause if I lose your work from my life I know my life quality will be lacking for it.

dude that was awesome wonder if hes a metamorphagues (sp?) so he changes naturally or a demon of some sort anyway huge fan n cant wait for more XD

You know, if I didn't know any better, I'd say that Harry/Cyrus intentionally gets himself into these messes. But that's not the case. The point here is that he always seems to bite off more than he can chew. '-.-

Mikhail needs to be taken down a peg or two, that's for sure.

It's a good thing Harry's getting cultural lessons, he really needs them.

I just laughed. I love how you can just add a touch of humour in a crazy, shit-filled situation. Gawd, I love this story!

What I'd like to see in the epilogue is some relationships from the original books restored. I really like how you've already started pulling George and Fred back into the story. While I love Shikaan and the characters from the school, I think some old characters should also be pulled in. If viable, I would like to see some other "Hogwarts dimwits" (and I'm saying this for lack of better terms mind you) wake up and realize that Cyrus has his reasons and is pretty damn awesome. It doesn't have to be all of the characters, just a couple more.

I do hope you include the summer sessions courses in this fic, but I understand if that's not part of your plot.

About the story - once again Cyrus has found himself in deep shit. I am beginning to be concerned for him -> is he ever going to realize what an idiot he is half the time? It would be nice if I didn't Cyrus in a deadly situation every other chapter, but again, your fic. Either way, there is no way in hell I'm going to stop now. I'm going all the way through the fic.

Good luck,
VVeitch

Man, usually I love George and Fred but compared to Cyrus and his abilities... smh.
That last part was hilarious!! Great job!

::Pumps fist into the air:: YES!! can't wait for more!!! awesome story!!

I LOVE the little red guy!!! he's awesome!

I love your story! It's very well written, has good OCs, and even though you've made Cyrus powerful you haven't made him a Gary-Stu.
Also, when I read that vampire's name was Pyralis I went, "AWESOME!". That's been my username on fanfiction for the longest time.