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for Bloody Skies

by TokiMirage

person noxlumen
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far, but you haven't written the chapter that tells me WHO you paired Harry with yet. There has also been alot of plot and almost no smut. Clearly we need you to write more to fix this, and I'm looking forward to reading when you do.
person Michelle
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story! I love reading it and hope you update soon!
person SilverLion
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cyrus and Tara are in even deeper shit than before. I am eagerly awaiting your next chapter. Can't wait to see what happens. TTFN! Ta-ta for now!
person stray523
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Is Tara going to survive? Is Cyrus going to get over his issues with being touched? (I think if he does his concerned demon buddy would make him a nice boyfriend :D) I can't wait for the next update!
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story and those who make those coments about smut didn't read warnings.
person LoBaR624
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story!! Can't wait to read more. I looked for the author Miranda Flairgold and her story 'A Second Chance at Life', and couldn't find either that are under those exact names, so if you know what else I could look under that would be great. Thanks. Anyway, continue writing and I'll continue reading.
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, your writing is so good. To be honest bloody skies is the one story that I find myself the most excited to read on this site. I think the combination of how you have created and developed your characters, with such a suspenseful and intriguing plot speaks of a lot of talent, and I look forward to your next installment to this gem of a story.

person melissa
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! I was so sad when I got to your last chapter because I just wanted to keep reading more and more. I can't wait for when you update! your an awsome writer and your story is captivating. I cant wait to see when happens next.
person Blood on the Water
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My love for your writing know no bounds. Honestly. I am so very excited to see how this finishes off!

Now! I realize this has no effect on your writing at all, but personally, the idea of pairing Cyrus, Rihven, and Yankovich makes me tingly. I'd have voted on your ff.net account if I had an account myself, but I don't. So, my vote goes here because I hope you'll agree with me when I say that pairing two decidedly experienced magical creatures with one decidedly not experienced virgin wizard is a very, very hot prospect.
person LoBaR624
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE it! I want to know more, to know what happens next! Please update soon.