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February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The only thing that wasn't quite right was the "cervix" bit. The cervix and g-spot are not the same thing. Hitting the cervix can actually be quite painful. Otherwise it was a great one-off with a clever twist at the end. Great stuff. :)
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June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me there's more. This is SO good! I loved it, and I really wouldn't mind more, honest! lol
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June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good start. Can't wait to read about their first interactions! I hope she makes him work for it. Snape makes determination look so sexy. :)
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June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot! Absolutely hot! Now when is my boyfriend getting home...
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June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I certainly hope that you will be doing a sequel to this one shot!! It was great and does seem to deserve to be called a prequel of sorts. I think that this deserves, not necessarily a chaptered story, although that would be great, but a much longer one shot for certain. Do let us know soon.
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June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! I think you could take this so much further than a one shot though. It would be interesting to see where it went. Great work and I hope to read more of it in the future.
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June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like your style, after a long day I sat down at my computer with a freshly made prawn curry in hand and WOW, I needed more than a curry after your story, strong start, you should write more chapters.