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by ronsmistress

person Robs
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear Hermione...why can't she just admit she has feelings for him and get on with it? Typical Hermione, making things difficult for herself. Ah well...by the sounds of it, Draco is going to find a way to get what he wants. Look forward to the next chapter!
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Tricky tricky...love it! Draco can be very persistant, that's what I love about him. That was great to bring back the notebook. Can't wait to read more!
person kazfeist
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hah! Great opening! :D
person kazfeist
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I always enjoy stories where it's Draco who's in touch with his feelings instead of the other way around. It's so refreshing! :D
person kazfeist
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I think Hermione is certainly not exhibiting classic Gryffindor courage. I wonder how you'll bring her around. Right not, she's not winning any congeniality contests. :D
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
She is so stubborn sometimes! lol, but I love how it played out in this chapter. And I like this kind of Draco =] Can't wait to see when he finally breaks her!
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Does he have the notebook charmed to write what she is thinking at the time of reading?
Great chapter waiting for more.
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
can someone hold down Hermione while I slap her? I really don't understand her ridiculous behaviour and overreaction. Draco just wants to talk - Slytherin or not, he's acting pretty mature and pretty committed to trying to have a real relationship.

PS: that notebook story was HOT.
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please explained why and what is going on with Hermione.... She is paranoic..and had lunatic she is worst than Luna. LOL
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad that you are writing a second part to this story!!! I'm very happy now!!!! Keep updating PLEASE!!!!